- Subject: Re: Star Wars and the end of Hubbard's interest in Scientology
From: Skipper <ainthere@charter.net>
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Date: Thu, 25 Sep 2003 15:35:30 GMT
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In article <MPG.19dcd1a22d8a9ec59896d3@news.snet.sbcglobal.net>, Lurker <Lurker@aol.com> wrote:
> Correct me if I'm wrong but it seems to me; when Star Wars took the big
> screen by storm, Hubbard thought more money could be made by creating a
> major motion picture rather than peddling his mind control cult, not to
> mention it would have main-stream acceptance. Isn't this the exact time
> when Hubbard tried to sell OT III to Hollywood aka "A Revolt in the
> Stars".
>
> It seem he lost all interest in Scientology at this point and focused on
> motion picture fame which obviously never came. This may be a stretch
> but it looks to me the success of Star Wars and his failure in motion
> pictures played a large part in his eventual insanity
I read the script of Revolt to the Stars. It was given to me by Gillian Eaton of "A Brilliant Film Company," which was headquartered at Crossroads of the World between Selma and Sunset Blvd. in Hollywood. The company was funded by Becky and Bobby Rounds, rich grandkids of Gaily Coleman of the Coleman Lantern fortune in Wichita, Kansas.
The script had illustrations in it. The bad guy, a space emperor (sound familiar?) was a bad ripoff of Ming the Merciless from the Flash Gordon movies. His minions were dressed in space opera versions of Nazi uniforms. You know, like the black uniforms the "finance police" were wearing a couple of years later when they gathered $cientologists together in forced meetings and screamed at them for not giving enough money to the cult.
The story was the same as Oatee Three. I told the story to Jacquie Loria over lunch. She was an Oatee Three and the secretary to Jack Gilardi at Intl. Creative Management, at the time the most influential agency in town. "That's the story of Oatee Three!" she exclaimed. "Why is he doing this?"
The production manager on Star Wars was a $cientologist named Lon Tinney, a self-important martinet of a man. No doubt his copy of the script was shared with Yvonne Jentzsch at Celebrity Centre, who forwarded it "uplines."
Hubbard was to be paid $666,000 if the script was ever filmed. 666, imagine that. I read the contract. They don't know how I managed to do that - I wasn't supposed to, and it wasn't at the film company offices. It's too bad they didn't make the movie, it might've led to a quicker demise of Humbug's church the way Battlefield Dirt with John Revolta did years later. BTW, Humbug's signature on the contract was forged.
Before Star Wars, if you mentioned around Celebrity Centre that Humbug had been a sci-fi writer, it was all "Shh, shh, we don't talk about that." After Star Wars, it was suddenly fashionable. Greedy plagiarist and copycat that he always was, Humbug immediately tried to cash in.
And if you're thinking of trying to attack me for that script, clamorons, save your lawyer's fees, I don't have one. Of course, that doesn't mean someone else doesn't have one floating around. Randy and Gillian Eaton bailed from the cult a long time ago but I'm sure they can be located.
Go Back to Shy David's Scientology Page.First Draft (Rough)
Wolfesaint8@aol.com
Revolt in the Stars
by
Harley Wolfe Jr.
From a script by
L. Ron Hubbard
REVOLT IN THE STARS
FADE IN:
EXT. ALDEBARAN - SPACE
An endless visage of stars shine in the void.
A single SPACE SHIP glides silently through the vacuum. On
its hull is the name ALDEBARAN.
SUPERIMPOSE: BORDER PATROL SHIP ALDEBARAN GALACTIC CONFEDERATION FRONTIER INT. ALDEBARAN - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS
We see the Bridge of the Aldebaran. At the HELM two scruffy
PILOTS monitor the flashing console in front of them.
PILOT #1
Another dull Patrol eh?
PILOT #2 Yep.
PILOT #1
We always get the shit patrols you
know?
Uh huh.
Uh huh.
PILOT #2
The second pilot nonchalantly flips a SWITCH. The first
pilot looks at him, irritated.
PILOT #1
You don’t seem to mind.
The second pilot shakes his head no.
PILOT #2
It’s the way things are. Just
accept that and you’ll be a much
happier person.
PILOT #1
A RED LIGHT flashes on the console. Both men become alert.
Uh huh.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
2.
PILOT #1
What do we got?
The Console RADAR SCREEN shows a red dot closing in on a
GRID.
PILOT #2
It looks like a single Grey ship.
Class two. It’s on a direct
trajectory for the defense grid.
PILOT #1
Suicide run?
PILOT #2
Not sure. But it’s still a good
ways out. PILOT #1
Better notify Fleet Command.
PILOT #2
Roger that. (Into Comm. Device)
This is the Border Patrol ship
Aldebaran calling Fleet Command,
over?
The men watch the VIDEO SCREEN. Then a loud STATIC NOISE
comes from the Console. Its irritating to hear. Both men
react to the noise.
PILOT #1 Damn!
The video screen remains blank. A voice comes over the
intercom.
VOICE (O.S.)
This is fleet command. Go ahead.
PILOT #2
Fleet command it looks like we’re
having technical difficulties on
this end. We’re not receiving you
on visual.
VOICE (O.S.)
We’re receiving you fine here
Aldebaran. Whats the situation?
The second pilot looks somewhat suspicious.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
3.
PILOT #2
We have an incoming Grey ship,
Class two. It’s heading straight
for the defense grid.
INT. COMMAND CENTER
Figures shrouded in the darkness move around in a dimly lit
room light lined with blinking COMPUTER EQUIPMENT. One of
the figures stands in front of a communications console.
PILOT #2 (O.S.)
(Filtered through radio)
Please advise, Over.
The first darkened figure looks at another figure standing
next to him. The other figure nods his head yes.
INT. ALDEBARAN - BRIDGE
The pilots await a reply. After a long, tense beat the voice
returns.
VOICE (O.S.)
Copy that Aldebaran. We’re aware of
the situation. We’re sending a
patrol to intercept the incoming
boogie. Return to base immediately.
Fleet command out.
Before the Pilots can respond the audio device CLICKS OFF.
The first Pilot sits back in his chair and rubs his chin.
PILOT #1
That was weird.
PILOT #2
We’ve never had a communication to
fleet command disrupted before.
PILOT #1
We have our orders. Setting course
for home base.
PILOT #2
Copy that, but I’m going to keep
scanning the sector. I want to see
this.
EXT. ALDEBARAN - SPACE
The Aldebaran changes direction as its engines fire up.
INT. ALDEBARAN - BRIDGE
The two pilots monitor the console. It shows the Grey vessel
approaching the defense grid. But with no sign of the
promised Loyal Officer patrol.
PILOT #1
Where the hell are they?
PILOT #2
I don’t know. (Beat) Raise Fleet
Command again.
The first pilot flips a switch.
PILOT #1
Fleet Command this is the Aldebaran
over.
This time there is no reply. Only more of the static noise.
PILOT #1
(More urgency)
Fleet Command come in. This is the
Aldebaran requesting backup, please
respond.
The radar shows the Grey Ship is near the defense grid.
PILOT #2
The incoming is on top of the grid!
EXT. SATELLITE - SPACE
A large Satellite floats against a back drop of Stars. In
the distance the Grey vessel rapidly approaches.
It collides with the Satellite knocking out the massive
FORCE FIELD and causes a cascade effect that reaches other
Satellites and causes them to explode as well.
4.
INT. ALDEBARAN - BRIDGE
The two pilots continue to monitor the radar. It shows the
defense grid going offline.
PILOT #1
The entire grid is down in sector
four! Now the Radar shows a large field of RED DOTS coming across
the border.
PILOT #2
My God, the Grey Fleet’s breaking
through! EXT. SPACE - DEFENSE GRID
An ARMADA of SAUCER SHAPED SPACE SHIPS glide past the
satellite debris.
Its a full on invasion of the GALACTIC CONFEDERATION.
INT. T.V. MONITOR - DAY
The Tele-screen depicts a Newscaster. Behind her is a
caption that reads: WAR!
NEWSCASTER
Today at approximately Eleven
twenty three R.T. the unthinkable
happened... The Galactic
Confederation was invaded. Somehow
the defense grid that has kept the
Grey Armada at bay since they first
appeared three years ago was
breached.
Then the screen shows a video of NINTH ARMY SOLDIERS and
ROYAL OFFICERS marching into awaiting Space ships.
NEWSCASTER (CONT.)
The Loyal Officers and Ninth Army
are now in full mobilization to
repel the invaders.
5.
EXT. CITY - DAY
From a grassy field, a futuristic looking CITY glimmers in
the distance. A RINGED GAS GIANT hoovers in the sky.
SUPERIMPOSE: CAPITAL CITY - PLANET CHELLIS TWO MONTHS LATER From this distance, the city looks tranquil. Its towering
SKYSCRAPERS reach to the heavens. But all is not as calm as
it seems as -
Suddenly, a FLYING SAUCER streams over head. It takes a
direct hit from an incoming missile and plunges to the
ground.
Then hordes of Grey invaders run into view. They fire their
LASER WEAPONS at an unseen opponent as they retreat towards
the city.
But many are cut down as a barrage of PLASMA FIRE plows
through their ranks.
Its a full-fledged maelstrom as the Grey aliens are beaten
back by -
THE LOYAL OFFICERS, and NINTH ARMY TROOPS.
These soldiers are beyond advanced. Bio mechanical Ultra
Humans.
The Loyal Officers are the "Warrior Kings" of the
Confederation. They appear more human. Similar to the
ancient KNIGHTS of lore.
The Ninth Army soldiers look more rugged, robotic. "The foot
soldiers". But both are engineered for combat.
One of the Loyal Officers stands out amongst the others. A
white Knight. COMMANDER RAWL. Governor of the planet
TEEGEEACK and leader of the Loyal Officers.
Rawl pushes his way forward. Leveling dozens of Greys with a
single volley from his automatic PLASMA RIFLE, the X-1.
He yells to the other troops.
RAWL
Advance!
Then Rawl looks at the city scape.
(CONTINUED)
6.
CONTINUED: 7.
From it, he sees three large SPACE SHIPS begin to lift off.
Grey vessels attempting to escape. Rawl speaks into his
wrist COMMUNICATIONS DEVICE.
RAWL (CONT.)
Three enemy ships are launching.
Take em down! A dozen incoming missiles slam into the fleeing vessels. Two
of the ships quickly collapse to the ground in a massive
fireball. The third ship, although damaged, continues its
ascent.
The Loyal Officers decimate their foe and reach the cities
edge.
EXT. CITY - DAY
The Loyal Officers enter the city, cautious. Their weapons
aimed high as the SOUNDS of sporadic gun fire can still be
heard ECHOING through the streets.
As the Officers scan the area. They see the city in ruins.
Its infrastructure smashed. Smoke rises. Rubble now where
buildings once stood.
As the Officers continue down the main boulevard, they hear
the sound of something approaching.
Dozens of human’s emerge from the smoke. They hold weapons
and aim at the soldiers. The humans start to scream.
MAN
Please Help us! We can’t stop our
self’s! MAN #2
The Grey’s are controlling us!
The humans open fire. A burst of return plasma fire from the
Loyal Officers. The humans die.
My God.
RAWL
SOLDIER
They were "Brain banged" by the
Grey’s.
I know.
RAWL
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 8.
The men looked stunned as they gaze at the gruesome scene as
out -
From the ranks, a Ninth Army Soldier approaches Rawl.
SOLDIER
Commander, Lieutenant Chi of the
Human observation team wishes to
speak with you sir.
Rawl gives a grim nod yes. He deactivates his THETA ARMOUR,
revealing a handsome face and wavy blond hair. Looking at
him one would never believe he’s a fierce warrior.
RAWL
Let him through.
Several uniformed men muscle their way through the ranks.
They look puny next to the armor-clad soldiers.
One of the men, LIEUTENANT CHI, head of the Human
Attache, walks up to Rawl. Chi motions towards the
devastation.
CHI
Do you see this Commander?
Rawl glares at Chi, no doubt he would love to deck this
prick.
RAWL
The city will soon be secure
Lieutenant. CHI
Yes, but at what cost? Human cost?
RAWL
A lot of my Soldiers died as well.
CHI
I’m not just talking about this
battle Rawl. I’m talking about the
entire war. So many Humans have
died.
Rawl peers at Chi before walking off without responding. Chi
returns a spiteful smirk.
Rawl approaches another Loyal Officer.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
9.
RAWL
Police the entire city. Take no
prisoners.
Yes Sir!
Yes Sir!
ROYAL OFFICER
Rawl scans the devastation as the Soldiers begin their
patrol.
FADE IN:
INT. T.V. MONITOR - DAY
INT. T.V. MONITOR - DAY
A TELEVISION SCREEN with a newscaster. A caption appears
behind her that reads: VICTORY!
NEWSCASTER
Victory for the Confederation! The
Loyal Officers have driven the Grey
Invaders from their last stronghold
on Chellis and the Grey Fleet is
now in full retreat. Its seems the
war may finally be over.
The scene on Television screen changes. It now shows Troops
disembarking from battle ships.
NEWSCASTER (CONT.)
Nevertheless, some questions remain
as to the apparent late response to
the invasion by the Loyal Officers
and the resulting high Human Death
toll. The government over site
committee has promised a full
investigation.
Another Channel shows protesters. A reporter interviews one
of the protesters. A shrill idiot.
PROTESTER #1
The Loyal Officers think they’re
better than us just because their
genetically enhanced. We’re just
human. That’s why they were so
slow!
Another protester grabs the mic.
FADE OUT:
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
10.
PROTESTER #2
Yeah, if they where the ones being
killed they’d have got off their
asses faster!
INT. CORPORATE OFFICE - NIGHT - CONTINUOUSTwelve figures sit at a TABLE in the middle of a large
darkened room.
One of them, MASTER LORD CHU, EXECUTIVE PRESIDENT OF THE
INTERGALACTIC BANK nervously twists the ring on his finger.
The twelve men watch a Tele-screen. The events of the
protest are being broadcast on the evening news. STY, The
head of the GALACTIC PSYCHIATRIC ORDER smiles at what he
sees.
CHU
An excellent idea to have our
operatives pose as protesters.
KOL
(Pointing at Sty)
Our resident Psychiatrist should be
thanked for that idea.
Sty gives a smug nod yes.
STY
Elementary Psychology really. And
along with agitating the people, it
should help sway public opinion in
our favor.
KOL
I’ll make sure the news coverage
continues to focus on the
protesters anger against the Loyal
Officers.
The group nod yes at each other.
FIGURE TWO
Now is the time to introduce our
candidate? FIGURE THREE
Yes. I believe the time is right.
Another figure, holding a CANE and hidden by shadow, moves
away from the window.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 11.
This is XENU, owner of THE GALACTIC ENERGY CORPORATION. One
of the wealthiest men in the Confederation.
XENU
Yes, it is time.
CHU
(Gesturing to the third
figure)
Are you ready?
FIGURE THREE
I’m ready. CHU
Then it’s settled.
Xenu interrupts.
No.
No? XENU CHU XENU
This is my plan. I’m taking control
of it. I will be the candidate.
A mixture of surprise and puzzlement comes over the twelve
men.
Xenu looks at KOL, the president of the GALACTIC NEWS CORP.
a mega media corporation that controls large areas of news
outlets.
XENU
Make me look good in the media Kol.
KOL
Every news channel will proclaim
your glory Xenu. You have my word.
INT. COUNSEL CHAMBERS - DAY
Loyal Officers are seated around at table. A holographic
display above the table shows Xenu at a rally. Many cheering
citizens are in attendance.
One of the Loyal Officers speaks, ATON.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
12.
ATON
The people want us to do
something...now. We must choose
him.
RAWL
I’m not sure about the choice. I’ve
heard many things about Xenu and
the way he conducts business. I
don’t trust him.
ATON
What specifically makes you so
weary of him? RAWL
I believe its possible if elected,
he would use the war as an excuse
to pass draconian law.
LAD
(Sarcastically)
Possible? ATON
The people are afraid of more Grey
attacks. RAWL
I’m telling you we drove the Greys
out! The idea of "marauding" Greys
still hiding in Confederation space
is Media hype, nothing more.
A sense of urgency comes over the group.
ATON
The Government over site committee
stated it’s possible some Grey
elements could have been left
behind. Abandoned by their fleet.
RAWL
That’s speculation at best. Where’s
the proof? LAD, another Loyal Officer chimes in. He attempts to change
the subject.
LAD
Electing Xenu could ease the
tension between us and the people.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
13.
RAWL (CONT.)
Would the people still be at ease
if they really understood all of
his proposals? Personal income Tax?
Credit reports? Identity cards for
all citizens?
LAD
Desperate times call for desperate
measures.
Rawl shakes his head no.
RAWL
The Confederation has faced many
threats in the past. It never
wavered from its founding
principles. I see no need to start
now.
ATON
It is the only way Rawl... But of
course, the final vote is yours.
After an intense beat.
RAWL
We serve the people...So be it.
Rawl stares at the Holographic Image of Xenu. The candidate
most popular with the people. The image burns in his mind.
INT. GALACTIC HALL OF THE PEOPLE - DAY
Xenu speaks to the assemble. The proceedings are being
recorded by FLOATING CAMERA BOTS and broadcast across the
Confederation.
XENU
Greetings my fellow citizens. I
come before you a humble man. A man
who has been given a great honor to
serve the Galactic Confederation.
And as promised, if elected, my
first action would be to pass an
executive order that would create
the Confederations first all human
Police organization, "The Galactic
Defense Force"! And I have just
signed that order into law.
Thunderous applause fills the auditorium. Except for the
Loyal Officers. Rawl particularly looks stoic.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 14.
This doesn’t go unnoticed by Xenu.
XENU (CONT.)
This force will be dedicated to the
safety and security of the people.
It will work in coordination with
the Loyal Officers to ensure that
another Grey attack never happens
again!
Rawl peers at Xenu. His words ECHO in his mind. Rawl turns
to his most trusted friend and fellow Loyal Officer, MISH.
RAWL
I hope I did the right thing Mish.
MISH
You did my friend. You did.
The applause continues.
FADE IN:EXT. SPACE - TEEGEEACK
FADE OUT:
A beautiful blue and white planet, TEEGEEACK, rotates
peacefully in space.
Several DC-8 shaped PLANETARY EVACUATION VEHICLES, each
capable of holding hundreds of thousands of people, glide
into orbit.
SUPERIMPOSE: PLANET TEEGEEACK TEN YEARS LATER EXT. PRAIRIE - DAY
An endless visage of grass and shrubs sway gently in the
breeze. A sharp contrast to the massive plums of smoke in
the far distance.
A large shadow sweeps across the field. Above flies an
almost invincible space ship, THE INTERCEPTOR PRYDWEN. The
Flag Ship of the Loyal Officers. It moves at incredible
speeds towards the plums.
A voice is heard.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
15.
RAWL (O.S.)
(Filtered through radio)
Base one, we’re closing in on the
volcano, over.
BASE ONE (O.S.)
Copy that Prydwen.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS
Rawl and Mish sit at the COMMAND CENTER.
MISH
We’re almost on target.
Rawl nods yes.
RAWL
Get me as close as you can, Mish
MISH You bet.
A BUZZ NOISE comes in over the console. Its LIEUTENANT ZEL,
of the Teegeeack Branch of the Galactic Defense Force.
MISH
Rawl, we have an incoming
communication from Lieutenant Zel
of the G.D.F. Teegeeack branch.
Rawl rolls his eyes.
RAWL
Go ahead Zel.
INT. BASE ONE - DAY
Zel monitors Prydwen on his computer screen, a suspicious
look on his face. Irritated. His demeanor exudes a "law and
order" mentality.
ZEL
(Into comm device)
Planetary EVAC ships are in orbit
Commander. Just give the order.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS
Rawl calmly leans into the inter-com.
RAWL
Copy that Zel. But give me ten
minutes, and I’ll have this
situation under control.
Rawl turns to Mish. He shakes his head.
RAWL (CONT.)
These emergency response boys
always over react.
MISH
Yeah The first thing they want to
do is relocate everybody when
things get a little rough.
INT. BASE ONE - DAY - CONTINUOUS
Zel clinches his jaw. He doesn’t like to be second guessed
about anything. He turns to an adviser standing next to him.
ZEL
(Whispering, Bitter sounding)
It’s inappropriate to have the
Governor leading such a dangerous
mission. We really should be
dealing with this.
ADVISER
The entire planets in danger and he
plays fly boy hero.
A drop-dead Gorgeous strawberry blond, confident, with the
body of a Goddess, and a left hook that could stop an
Elephant, over hears this exchange.
MIN, another Loyal Officer, steps forward.
Zel and his adviser notice her approaching. They shrink,
looking like two school boys about to get scolded.
MIN
Boys, do I need to remind you that
you’re talking about our leader?
The voice of the peoples Congress
and a war hero?
16.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 17.
Zel attempts to compose himself. He gulps, then puts on his
phony "tough policeman" persona in an attempt to gain
control of the situation.
ZEL
No disrespect intended lady Min.
We’re simply concerned about his
safety.
Lady Min gives an unfriendly smirk.
MIN
Good answer guys.
INT. PRYDWEN - HANGER
Rawl enters the Hanger. He speaks into his wrist comm.
RAWL
Mish, I’m suiting up.
MISH (O.S.)
Okay. Good luck Rawl!
Rawl clicks a button on a belt around his waist. Glowing
partials trickle out and cover him from head to toe. Theta
Armor coalescing into what looks like iridescent metal.
The Theta symbol emblazoned on his chest. The armor looks as
hard as diamonds.
He steps up to the launch bay doors. Loud CLANGS echo with
each step. He picks up the H-345 THERMO DEVICE, straps it to
his back, then opens the hanger door.
A tremendous blast of air fills the hanger. Rawl looks out
the open door, blue sky and fluffy clouds zip by. He bolts
for the door and leaps out.
EXT. SUPER VOLCANO - DAY - CONTINUOUSA smoldering and fiery landscape stretch as far as the eye
can see, lava spews up into the air.
A SUPER VOLCANO, ready to unleash a destructive power that
could level the continent and threaten all life on
Teegeeack.
From above this hellish scene a shinny object falls from the
sky. It hurdles toward the ground, striking it with
incredible force.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 18.
Tons of rubble explode upwards from the collision. Inside
the impact crater, kneeling, is Rawl.
He quickly stands, then jump’s into action so fast he’s
almost a blur.
Rawl crisscrosses the molten lava landscape. An eruption
explodes in front of him. He leaps over it, lands on his
feet and continues, all in one non stop motion.
Mish’s voice comes in.
MISH(O.S.)
You’re almost there Rawl. Remember
you’ve only got one shot.
Rawl is blown over by another micro explosion. He lands hard
but is unharmed.
RAWL
(Sarcastic)
Thanks Mish! I almost forgot.
He gets to his feet again and bolts up a mountain side.
Rawl comes upon a cave entrance. Inside, is the heart of the
super volcano’s rage. He enters.
INT. SUPER VOLCANO - DAY
As Rawl enters the cave, he looks like an ant compared to
the enormity of the cavernous expanse.
Further down, at the bottom of a steep valley, flows a river
of lava.
Rawl runs deeper into the mountain, reaching the lava river.
He takes the H-345 Thermo device off his back and places it
near the edge of the cliff above the lava flow. He pushes
some buttons. The device activates. A screen shows a two-
minute countdown.
Then a massive quake rocks the cave. A tidal wave of molten
lava engulfs Rawl at the same time knocking the Thermo
device over the cliff.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
Mish looks at his computer screen. He sees that Rawal’s in
trouble.
MISH
Rawl! Do you copy?
Nothing comes back over the airwaves.
MISH (CONT.)
Rawl! Come in!
INT. VOLCANO - DAY
A mound of hardening lava steams as it cools. It cracks and
explodes. Rawl flicks off the remaining pieces and
rushes to the cliff edge.
He looks over and sees the Thermo device perched on a rocky
outcrop below. The countdown reads forty-five seconds and
counting. He’s got to haul ass.
RAWL
Mish, the device is in place. I’m
coming out now.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS
Mish looks calmer now that hes heard Rawls voice. But
there’s a sense of urgency in his reply.
MISH
Make it fast! This whole area is
going to be a super cooled winter
wonderland in about 30 seconds.
EXT. SUPER VOLCANO - DAY
Rawl runs out of the cave. He looks up to see Prydwen
hovering above. Its hanger door open. He leaps with super-
human strength and lands on the hatch.
INT. PRYDWEN - HANGER
Rawls safely inside Prydwen, without a moment to lose. He
clicks his communication device.
19.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
20.
RAWL
Mish, punch it!
EXT. SUPER VOLCANO - PRYDWEN - DAY
With a blast from its jets, Prydwen rockets away just as the
Thermo device detonates.
A blinding flash of LIGHT emanates out of the volcano.
Instantly the eruption stops. The lava solidifies.
Ice spreads across the mountain and the surrounding area for
miles.
The Super Volcano is completely dormant, frozen solid. The
planet is saved.
The same may not be said for the Prydwen.
The ICE BLAST SHOCK WAVE is so powerful it even freezes the
air. The wave is right behind the ship, getting closer.
If the ship gets caught in the wave it could spell disaster.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
Mish is furiously working the helm as beads of sweat trickle
down his forehead.
Rawl hops into the Command chair.
RAWL
Report! MISH
We’re about to find what it’s like
to be a Popsicle!
EXT. PRYDWEN The Ice blast shock Wave slightly brushes the back of the
ship. Ice crystals begin to form on the tail.
The Interceptor is about to be engulfed.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS
Rawl and Mish strain as the G forces push them back in their
chairs.
EXT. PRYDWEN The shock wave seems poised to over take the ship. But one
last blast of the ships rockets pushes it out of the waves
reach.
The interceptor escapes. The ships undamaged. The shock wave
dissipates.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
Rawl sets back in his chair. He let’s out a deep sigh of
relief. He looks over at Mish who does the same. Rawl
smiles. Another brush with death, another escape.
MISH
We’re out of range of the blast.
We’re out of Danger.
RAWL
Well done Mish! Take us back to
base. MISH
Setting course.
RAWL
Piece of cake!
MISH
Yep. Nothing to it. (Beat) I need a
drink! EXT. TEEGEEACK BASE ONE - DAY
The Prydwen reaches the base and gracefully lands.
Military personal roll a staircase up to the ship. Its hatch
opens and out step’s Rawl. Hes greeted by CAPTAIN JOC. A
salute. A return salute. Then a handshake.
JOC
Welcome back Sir. And may I say job
well done!
Rawl appreciatively shrugs off the compliment.
21.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
22.
RAWL
All in a days work Captain.
Rawl makes his way to the bottom of the staircase where a
large group of REPORTERS and other media are waiting. CAM
BOTS float around, recording.
Several reporter’s jam microphones in his face. A cacophony
of questions about the days heroic events hit him at once.
He cuts his way through the crowd. They follow.
--I’m not
-- No not
-- No not
Commander? --
RAWLa hero!
RAWL
true at all.
REPORTER TWO
Is it true you almost died?
-- REPORTER THREE
How does the device you
used to stop the volcano
work? --
REPORTER ONE
How does it feel to be a hero
RAWL
-- It basically quick
freezes everything within a
geographical area.
REPORTER THREE
Are you serious about repealing the
"Galactic security Act" in the up-
coming Congress?
This question stops Rawl in his tracks. A buttons been
pushed.
RAWL
No comment. That’s all for now
thank you. Rawl breaks away from the crowd. He sees Min standing alone
in the distance. She smiles at him. He smiles back.
Mish sees what’s going down and can’t help but jab at Rawl.
MISH (Coy) Hey Rawl, I’ll catch you later
(short beat) if you’re not busy.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
23.
RAWL
(Smiling)
Okay.
Rawl walks up to Min and they enter the base together.
INT. BASE ONE HALL - BALCONY
Two shadowy figures stand in the balcony that overlooks the
Hall. It’s Zel and his assistant.
ZEL
(Quietly)
Contact home planet. Let Xenu know
how well our valiant Leader
performed today.
His assistant gives a solemn nod yes.
INT. BASE ONE - HALL
There’s electricity between Rawl and Min. Lovers.
As they approach the Hall exit, they come upon a strange
looking humanoid. AP, the last ANTIKYTHERIAN model ANDROID.
Known for specializing in logic and calculation.
AP
Commander. Welcome back.
RAWL
Thank you Ap. Surprised to see me
in one piece? AP
No. I calculated your chances for
success where eighty percent or
better.
RAWL
Good odds. So what’s on the agenda?
AP
Well, since the world didn’t end
today, Teegeeack’s delegation to
the Congress is back on schedule.
Rawl smiles and starts walking again. Through the exit, he
looks back.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
24.
RAWL
Count me in!
AP
I was hoping you’d say that.
(Serious) It will be an eventful
congress indeed.
EXT. SPACESUPERIMPOSE: OUTER LIMITS
SECTOR 22
A lone Grey MOTHER SHIP attempts an escape. But its
surrounded by hundreds of Ninth Army FIGHTER CRAFT. They
launch a barrage of plasma fire at the vessel.
Three gigantic GALACTIC CRUISERS also pursue from a
distance.
A missile hits its mark. Sparks bellow out of the Mother
Ships side. It slows to a stop.
INT. GALACTIC CRUISER - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS
CAPTAIN KEP surveys the battle through the bridge portal.
HELMSMAN
Sir, the Grey ship is disabled.
KEP
Are communications with Fleet
Command still down?
HELMSMAN
Yes Sir. Same as before. Nothing
but static. KEP
(Into comm. device)
Attention all fighters. Cease fire
and disengage. Alpha Squad prepare
to board the enemy vessel.
EXT. SPACE - GALACTIC CRUISER - CONTINUOUS
The Cruisers hanger door opens and a SHUTTLE CRAFT exits. It
SPARKS erupt around the edges of a hatch. The door hits the
The Cruisers hanger door opens and a SHUTTLE CRAFT exits. It
approaches the Grey vessel.
The Shuttle lands on the Mother Ships hull.
INT. GREY MOTHER SHIP - CORRIDOR - CONTINUOUSSPARKS erupt around the edges of a hatch. The door hits the
floor with a metallic BANG.
Dozens of Ninth Army troops, Alpha Squad, enter and take
combat positions.
At the far end of the corridor, several figures stir in the
dim light. Armed with rifles they aim at the Soldiers.
A blast of plasma fire streaks down the corridor. Several
soldiers are cut down.
The Ninth Army soldiers return fire at figures they can
hardly see.
Flashes of light briefly illuminate the corridor as both
sides engage in furious close quarters combat.
Kep takes out two PLASMA GRENADES and tosses them. They roll
down the isle and EXPLODE.
The smoke clears. The guns fall silent. The enemy’s been
killed.
Kep motions for the men to follow him.
KEP
Get to the bridge.
Kep stops and looks at the dead combatants. He seems
puzzled.
INT. GREY MOTHER SHIP - BRIDGE
The bridge door opens, and Alpha Squad enters. Dead bodies
lie everywhere. The dead bodies are humans, Not Grey’s.
Kep flips over one of the bodies. He pulls up the dead mans
shirt. He sees the emblem often worn by G.D.F. tattooed on
the his chest.
Kep motions to a soldier.
25.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
26.
Then:
Look.
G.D.F.?
KEP SOLDIER
EXT. SPACE - GREY MOTHER SHIP
Fissures of light open near the Mother Ship. Three GALACTIC
DEFENSE FORCE BATTLE SHIPS come through the fissures and
take an attack posture.
INT. GREY MOTHER SHIP - BRIDGE
A Holographic Image of Chi, now wearing the GREY/GREEN
UNIFORM of the Galactic Defense Force appears on the bridge.
CHI
This is Lieutenant Chi of The
Galactic Defense Force. According
to Article 28, this operation now
falls within our jurisdiction.
KEP
I have something to report
Lieutenant. These are not Grey
Soldiers, their Human.
Chi looks more annoyed than concerned by this.
CHI
Perhaps they were brain banged by
Grey gorillas. Possibly for a
suicide mission.
KEP
Maybe. But nothing like this has
happened since the war. Shouldn’t
Fleet Command be notified?
CHI
Yes, and they will be. But after
we’re done investigating. For now
return to your ships. But don’t
leave the area. You’ll be required
to give a debriefing before you go.
Chi out.
Chi’s image fades away before Kep has a chance to respond.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
27.
SOLDIER
You didn’t mention they were
G.D.F.. KEP
No I didn’t. Because I smell a rat.
We need to get back to Central
Command asap and report this. Get
the men back to the shuttle. We’re
leaving.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS
Chi watches the shuttle disengage from the Grey ship.
CHI
Once they’ve returned to their
ship, neutralize them.
HELMSMAN
Yes, Sir. INT. GALACTIC CRUISER - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS
Kep enters the bridge and hops into the command position. He
turns to the Helm.
KEP
Anything from fleet?
HELMSMAN
No sir. Still not able to get
through. KEP
Then set a course for home base.
HELMSMAN
What about Chi’s orders to stay in
the area? KEP
I don’t take orders from the
Galactic Defense Force.
The ensign smiles and nods yes.
HELMSMAN
Course plotted Captain.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
28.
KEP
Engage engines.
Just as Kep gives the order the lights on the bridge
flicker. The consoles begin to darken. Its as if the ships
being drained of power.
CO-PILOT
Commander all systems except life
support report power failure!
KEP
What the hell?
EXT. GALACTIC CRUISER
The Cruisers lights flicker and go dark. The vessels are
dead in space.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS Chi sees the ships are disabled. HELMSMAN
The Ships have been neutralized
Lieutenant. CHI
Very good. Engage tractor beam.
We’ll tow them to Coltus and detain
them there.
HELMSMAN
And the Grey ship?
CHI
Destroy it.
EXT. SPACE - G.D.F. SHIPS - GALACTIC CRUISERS
The G.D.F. Ships move forward with the captured Ninth Army
vessels in tow.
A battery of missile’s strike the Grey Mother ship. Its
vaporized instantly.
EXT. TEEGEEACK CAPITAL - DAY
The beautiful capital seemingly stretches over the horizon.
Tall skyscrapers dot the landscape. Ultra modern. Having an
art deco flavor.
Rawl’s private SKY CAR flys through this impressive view.
Several G.D.F. Surveillance Bots pass by the air car.
INT. SKY CAR - DAY
Rawl notices the Surveillance bots, FREEDOM DRONES. They
hoover close for a moment before flying downward to monitor
the city streets below. Min motions out the window.
MIN
Freedom drones.
RAWL
(Sarcastically)
More like Xenu’s spy bots.
Then Rawl looks outside at a G.D.F. electronic billboard.
They seem plastered on every corner of the city. The boards
present a ugly contrast to the beautiful architecture.
A handsome, clean cut ANNOUNCER appears on the screen. He
speaks with such volume that his words easily bleed into the
air car.
ANNOUNCER
Jobs, homes, and more importantly,
security with a strong defense
force. That’s what "The Galactic
Security Act" brings to the people
of the Confederation. If you
support it, you support your
future. And remember, Taxation is
the mother of civilization.
Then a caption appears that reads: Brought to you by The
Office of the Supreme Ruler.
Rawl turns his head away in disgust. Min takes him by the
hand and he manages a smile.
29.
EXT. GOVERNORS PALACE - DAY
The air car glides into position and lands at the platform
of the Beautiful Governors Palace.
A beautiful structure of Celtic design. The symbol of a LION
hangs over the Palace entrance.
INT. RAWLS BEDROOM - DAY
Rawl and Min enter the bedroom. Its surprisingly quaint for
a Loyal Officer. Attractive in a minimalist way.
Min doesn’t waist any time. She grabs Rawl and lays a
passionate kiss on his lips.
MIN
God I love you.
RAWL
The feelings mutual.
This is it. Min throws off her skin-tight jump suit. Her
beautiful nude body illuminated by the rooms soft light.
Passionate kisses continue as they make their way to the
bed.
FADE IN:
INT. RAWLS BEDROOM - LATER
Rawl and Min cuddle next to each other in bed, savoring each
others company.
RAWL
Where you worried about me today?
MIN
No.
Oh?
Oh?
MIN
I knew you’d be okay. And I knew
you’d save the planet. I never
doubted it.
RAWL
(Playfully)
30.
FADE OUT:
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
31.
RAWL
I’m so lucky to have such a big
fan. MIN
And I’m so lucky to have you.
Lady Min gives him another kiss. Then looks deep in his
eyes. Shes got something on her mind. And its not about the
Volcano incident.
MIN (CONT.)
But I’m worried about the Congress.
RAWL
Don’t be.
MIN
Rawl I’ve heard things about what
happens to people who oppose Xenu.
RAWL
He doesn’t know what opposition is.
MIN
I know your up to something. Tell
me!
Rawl hesitates.
MIN (CONT.)
Come on. Spill it Mister.
RAWL
I made a terrible mistake putting
Xenu in office. I’m going to
impeach him.
Min is stunned. For a moment she can’t speak.
MIN
My God Rawl, impeachment? Are you
sure you want to go that far?
RAWL
Yes. And not only that I’m going to
nullify every executive order he’s
passed in last decade. You have to
trust me.
Min still looks uncertain. Her soft eyes exploring his.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
32.
MIN
I do trust you. But I worry. I cant
help it.
Rawl caresses her shoulder.
RAWL
Min, I’ve watched as crime, drug
use, inflation have all skyrocketed
since this man has been in office.
Its not a coincidence. I think he’s
behind it.
MIN Why?
XENU
So he can pass more intrusive laws
under the pretense of fighting
crime. So his precious police force
can have an excuse to spy on
everyone. (beat) So he can gain
more control.
Min lays back. A thoughtful expression comes across her
face.
MIN
Do you think you have enough
support? RAWL
I know I have enough votes to
repeal the "Galactic security act."
As far as Impeachment...I’m not
sure.
MIN
You know you can count on me.
They embrace again.
EXT. HOME PLANET
Home Planet. Beautiful. Similar to Teegeeack. Its the center
of The Galactic Confederation.
SUPERIMPOSE: HOME PLANET
EXT. CAPITAL CITY - DAY
The majestic Capital city glistens in the midday sun. With
its towering, imposing spires, its an art deco megalopolis.
INT. XENU’S OFFICE - DAY
Dark, sterile. Chairs and tables that look like blocks of
concrete rather than furniture. Cold and meticulous.
At the window Xenu stares into the distance. He leans on his
club like cane.
An individual comes into the room and rushes over to him.
MESSENGER
Lord Xenu, I have a message from
Teegeeack. Its lieutenant Zel.
Xenu shushes him away with his hand.
XENU Not now.
The messenger obediently stands aside.
Xenu’s henchmen are seated at a table in the center of the
room.
Chi is the first to chime in. He looks contemptuously at a
G.D.F. Officer sitting across from him.
CHI
Those idiots you sent managed to
get captured by Fleet Command. Do
you realize what a mess that was? I
had to incarcerate three Galactic
Cruisers!
G.D.F. OFFICER
I told you the mission was too
risky. CHI
The only thing they had to do was
get detected by Fleet
reconnaissance. Not get blown out
of space. It could have jeopardized
the whole Psi-Op.
33.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
34.
G.D.F. OFFICER
Alright! I get it! It won’t happen
again. Xenu steps away from the window. He casually walks up behind
the G.D.F. Officer.
XENU
(Cold, calculating)
Your right (beat) it won’t.
Xenu snaps into instantaneous action. With a fast,
deliberate reflex -
- He swings his cane into the back of the G.D.F. officers
head. A spurt of blood. The officer kills over on the table
with a THUD, dead.
XENU (CONT.)
Incompetence will not be tolerated
Gentlemen. There’s too much at
stake.
The men nervously nod yes in agreement. Xenu motions to the
guards to carry the dead officer away. They hastily carry
him out of the room.
The men grimly compose themselves.
KOL
It doesn’t matter. We already have
a cover story ready. A rouge Quasar
destroyed them. Nice, clean and no
evidence to search for.
CHI
We’ll hold a phony memorial service
at the palace.
Xenu gives an agreeing nod.
XENU (CONT.)
(Nonchalantly)
Now to the business at hand. As you
are aware, the 2054th Congress will
be held the day after tomorrow. Up
until now I have been able to enact
my executive orders slowly without
upsetting the peasants or tipping
my hand to the Loyal Officers. But
the situation has changed. We know
from our inside sources that the
Loyal Officers may attempt to
(MORE) (CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
35.
XENU (CONT.) (cont’d)
repeal the "Galactic Security Act."
This of course is unacceptable.
Therefore I must greatly accelerate
the program. Chi go ahead.
Chi gets up and turns on a Holographic display.
CHI
Thank you your supremacy. The
botched false flag operation in the
Outer Limits was to be the
beginning stages of "Operation
Ramrod.". During the Grey invasion,
our operatives were able to capture
a large number of Grey vessels,
without the Government’s or the
Loyal Officers knowledge. The plan
is to man these Grey ships and
stage an attack on one of the outer
Planets.
The holgram of a planet being attacked from space is
displayed.
XENU
This attack will undoubtedly cause
mass panic among the people. Not
only will they demand my executive
orders remain in place. They will
ask for even more intervention on
the part of the Executive branch.
After that I will declare martial
Law.
BANKER #1
What about the Loyal Officers?
Especially Commander Rawl. He’ll
never agree to it.
XENU
We have a contingency plan for that
as well. BANKER #2
He’s on your "kill list" then?
XENU
Let’s just say that very soon Rawl
or the Loyal Officers will never
bother us again.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
36.
BANKER #2
What is the end game of Ramrod my
Lord? Xenu pushes a button. The holographic image changes to a
chart that depicts the Confederations population and its
growth.
XENU
Gentlemen there is a cancer that is
eating away at the Confederation.
If it’s not cut out soon, it will
become so pervasive it will spiral
out of control. The population. It
must be reduced, significantly.
Operation Ramrod is the program to
achieve that goal.
BANKER #1
Depopulate the Confederation?
XENU
Yes. But first we must deal with
those who could actually stop our
plan.
BANKER #1
Details my lord?
XENU
Ramrod will unfold in three
"Phases." Phase one, The
termination of all Loyal Officers.
Phase two, the destruction of all
Galactic Bases. Phase Three, the
forced relocation of unwanted
citizens from their home planets to
Teegeeack and their termination
there.
CHU
Which citizens fall under the
"unwanted" category?
XENU
Mostly, the troublesome minority
groups. Then those citizens prone
to oppose conformity. After it’s
finished we’ll have a much smaller
and more docile population to deal
with.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
37.
CHU
I understand your supremacy.
Kol motions at Xenu.
KOL
Your supremacy, the propaganda
piece I made for you is about to be
broadcast.
XENU
Ah. Very good, turn on the
Tele-screen.
Kol turns on the Tele-Screen device. A caption reads "Xenu:
Our Supreme Ruler." appears.
Then a good-looking newscaster appears with a photo of Xenu
behind him.
NEWSCASTER
Hello. I’m Som Luki. Some have
called him a ruthless business
tycoon. Others, a caring, dedicated
leader. Tonight’s program will
examine the amazing journey of
Xenu, owner and C.E.O. of the
Galactic Energy Corporation who
went on to becoming the Supreme
Ruler of the Confederation. Join us
as we...
Then the program is abruptly interrupted. Another Newscaster
appears. A caption: "Disaster Averted" reads behind him.
NEWSCASTER
Breaking news from Teegeeack.
Reports have just come in state
that the Super Volcano which has
been threatening the planet for the
past month has been neutralized in
what’s being called nothing less
than a heroic operation carried out
by War hero and Teegeeack Governor,
Commander Rawl...
XENU
What the hell?
The messenger chimes in.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
38.
MESSENGER
That was what I was going to tell
you Lord. The message from
Teegeeack.
A photo of a smiling Rawl pops up on the screen.
Xenu grits his teeth. A picture of the Super Volcano raging
burns into his eyes.
Kols face turns white as the blood drains away in terror. He
grabs his communicator and and yells into it.
KOL
I told you no interruptions no
matter what! Pull it now!
Xenu turns to Chi and snaps.
XENU
I want him dead! After the
Congress! I don’t care how just do
it!
He then turns back to a cowed Kol. A look of murderous rage
shows on Xenu’s face as he pumps his cane.
EXT. SPACE PORT - ENTRANCE - DAY
Hundreds of Loyal Officers stand at the SPACE PORT entrance.
In the distance, the diplomatic space ship TEEGEEACK ONE
sits on a launch pad.
Rawl, Min, Mish, Ap, approach the gate.
Rawl looks at a Tele-Screen to his right. A lovely FEMALE
G.D.F. ANNOUNCER appears.
FEMALE ANNOUNCER
Citizens, the Grey invaders have
been known to telepathically
manipulate humans. So if you
observe anyone acting suspiciously,
or making "anti-government"
statements, You should report it at
once to your nearest Galactic
Defense Force branch. Remember that
Freedom requires constant
vigilance.
Then a caption appears that reads: This message brought to
you by the Galactic Defense Force. Protecting your future.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 39.
Rawl turns away and looks at the Prydwen parked in the
distance.
RAWL
I wish we were taking her instead.
I don’t trust these diplomatic
ships.
MISH
I know what you mean. It’s just
ceremony. RAWL
Yeah... Its just an odd feeling is
all. MISH
Hey! Prydwen will be here when we
get back.
Rawl smiles.
RAWL
Yeah, your right.
They step through the gate.
Then out of no where, someone puts a hand on Rawls shoulder.
A G.D.F. Soldier. He nervously smiles.
AGENT
Sir, can you step through the Scan
device please?
This snaps Rawl out of his pleasant reverie. He looks angry
for a moment. But he obliges and steps through.
EXT. SPACE PORT - LAUNCH PAD
Teegeeack One’s engines ignite and the ship lifts off.
EXT. TEEGEEACK ORBIT
The ship leaves the upper atmosphere. A flicker burst of
light materializes in front it. It enters the fissure and
vanishes.
EXT. HOME PLANET - ORBIT
Fissures of light materialize above Home Planet. Teegeeack
One emerges and enters the planet’s atmosphere.
EXT. HOME PLANET - SPACE PORT - DAY
The ship lands at the Capital City Space Port.
EXT. GALACTIC HALL - DAY - CONTINUOUSStanding in the middle of the city is a majestic structure.
THE GREAT GALACTIC HALL OF THE PEOPLE.
Lining each side of the walk way that leads to the entrance
are the FLAGS of the 76 planets of the Confederation.
Droves of people are entering.
INT. GALACTIC HALL - AUDITORIUM - CONTINUOUS
As we scan the auditorium we see a giant wreath, with 21
stars in its middle. It dominates the back wall.
At the back of the auditorium is the station of the
EXECUTIVE BRANCH. Xenu’s cabinet are seated there.
Xenu himself presides at a high Podium that enables him to
view the entire audience.
The noise dies down as the delegates settle in. The Loyal
Officers take their seats.
Xenu’s and Rawls eyes lock for a moment. An instant tension
builds.
Xenu takes a brass hammer and hits a gong. The sound
reverberates. A silence ensues.
XENU
I, Xenu, duly elected Supreme Ruler
by the Loyal Officers of the
Galactic Confederation, do declare
the two thousand and fifty-fourth
Congress to be in session.
An Archbishop stands. He puts his hands together in a prayer
gesture and lowers his head.
40.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
41.
ARCHBISHOP
All blessings to Almighty God and
the Galactic Confederation, upon
its 21 stars, upon its 76 green
planets, upon its trillions of
population and upon the Loyal
Officers, loyal to the people, to
the Confederation and to God and
this Congress. May peace and
prosperity continue as it has for
ages past.
The Archbishop sits down.
Xenu clears his voice. He scans the auditorium. His face
authoritative, determined.
XENU
Before we get to the normal affairs
of the Congress it has been brought
to my attention that some factions
have questioned certain executive
orders I have passed. Some (quickly
glancing at Rawl) suggesting they
should be repealed. I believe this
should be taken up immediately and
dispensed with so that we may get
on with more pressing matters.
A crier turns to the audience and bellows.
CRIER
The Congress is now open for its
first deliberations.
The speaker for the Loyal Officers, JON, steps up to the
Rostrum that faces the Executive branch. Although he speaks
for them, he is not a Loyal Officer himself.
JON
Lord Xenu, I speak on behalf of the
Loyal Officers. They elected you
ten years ago to protect the people
of the Confederation and to ensure
that it is safe from another
attack. And since that time, you
have done just that.
The Royal Officers look questionably at Jon as he continues.
Its as if he’s going off script.
Rawl turns to Mish.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
42.
RAWL
(Whispering)
This is what we get for hiring an
outsider to speak for us.
Mish nods in agreement.
JON (CONT.)
And although the Grey Invaders were
defeated, we are fully aware that
the Confederation is still
technically at a state of war. So
it’s reasonable that some
"enhancements" to existing law are
necessary in order to keep the
Confederation safe. However, there
may be some question as to how far
these laws should go.
Xenu lifts his hand, motioning to speak.
XENU
May I have a rebuttal?
JON
Of course your Supremacy.
XENU
The laws that I passed are totally
in line with the Galactic
Constitution and completely
necessary to maintain the safety of
the people.
JON
But some have argued that your
recent executive order, the
"Galactic Security act," gives the
government too much latitude to
monitor the private communications
of citizens as well as raising an
already high Taxation rate.
Xenu contemptuously smirks.
XENU
Untrue. We know
through Intelligence that
marauding Greys have captured
humans, brainwashed them and placed
them back into society for use as
sleeper agents. Therefore, it is
necessary to monitor private
(MORE) (CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
43.
XENU (cont’d)
communications in order to prevent
such activity.
JON
Yes, this is true and has been
reported as such in the media.
Rawl glares at the exchange. He’s visibly becoming more
agitated with passing each word.
XENU
Additionally, these programs must
be funded. Increased taxes are the
only way to maintain them. So you
see these measures are needed. And
anyone who opposes them flirts with
treason!
Rawl abruptly jumps up from his chair. He briskly approaches
the rostrum. The audience focuses in on him.
RAWL Enough!
Jon grabs Rawl by the shoulder. A rather brazen thing to do
to a Loyal Officer.
JON
You can’t do this! I’m the
designated speaker for the Loyal
Officers!
Rawl pushes Jon. He falls to the floor. Rawl shakes his head
no as he peers down at him. Gasps come from the audience.
RAWL
Yes, I can. And your fired!
Rawl turns at the Royal Officers.
RAWL (CONT.)
The Confederation was founded on
the principles of Liberty. The
actions of the Executive branch
have brought it to the brink of
becoming a police state. And it
must stop here, now! I motion to
repeal every executive order passed
by Xenu in the last ten years. Do I
have your votes on this motion?
The Loyal Officers take the voting devices in their hands
and press the buttons.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 44.
The massive HOLOGRAPHIC VOTE TALLY SCOREBOARD reads: "MOTION
PASSED."
RAWL (CONT.)
I also motion to enact impeachment
proceedings against Xenu and his
entire cabinet. Do I have your
votes on this motion?
Gasps fill the hall. The Loyal Officers look hesitant,
unsure.
After a tense beat the vote reads: "MOTION PASSED."
Then Rawl adresses the entire audience.
RAWL (CONT.)
The motions have passed. We will
reconvene at the appointed time for
the lawful proceedings of
Impeachment. As duly head of the
Loyal Officers, I hereby declare
this Congress concluded!
Xenu looks utterly stunned. His face pale. He drops his cane
and slumps in the chair.
Commotion fills the hall.
EXT. GREAT HALL - DAY - CONTINUOUS As the multitudes exit the Great Hall, Rawl stands by
himself. He gazes at the Capital City skyline in the
distance.
Lady Min sees him.
She walks to him and they embrace.
MIN
You were wonderful.
RAWL
Thanks. Ready to go home?
MIN Yes.
They walk arm in arm to an airbus and enter. The air bus
lifts off.
Standing on the staircase is a Soldier of the Galactic
Defense Force. He discreetly observes the air bus fly away.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
45.
G.D.F. SOLDIER
(into comm device)
They just left for the Space Port.
CHI (O.S.)
I want to know the minute they
leave the planet.
G.D.F. SOLDIER
Yes Sir. INT. XENU’S OFFICE - DAY
The door bust’s open. Kicked so hard it almost come off its
hinges.
Xenu hastily enters the room, face red with rage.
Chi and Sty follow keeping a good distance away.
Xenu picks up a vase on the table and smashes it against the
wall. Other objects follow.
Chi and Sty wearily watch this outburst with cautious
curiosity.
Then Xenu stops slowly composes himself.
He makes his way to the conference table and sits. He
motions for Chi and Sty to do the same.
XENU
A minor set back gentlemen. Soon
Rawl will be dead. And my plan will
be in full motion.
CHI
He will be dead. I’ve seen to that.
But I never thought he would bring
impeachment proceedings. (beat) The
whole operations in jeopardy now.
Xenu slyly glances at Sty. A smirk grows on his lips.
XENU
A minor setback like I said.
Doctor, I believe its time to show
Chi our little secret.
STY
I agree your eminence.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
46.
Secret?
CHI
XENU
Get ready Chi, we’re going on a
trip. INT. TEEGEEACK ONE - PASSENGER AREA
Rawl looks out into deep space, he seems preoccupied. Min
places her hand on his leg.
MIN
What’s on your mind?
RAWL
I’m thinking we should celebrate.
I’m going to declare today an
official holiday.
MIN
We can throw a party at the Palace.
Rawl agrees. MISH
Sounds like fun.
Rawl nods yes and looks back out the window. He notices the
stars, they seem strange.
Then the ship starts to rattle.
EXT. TEEGEEACK ONE - SPACE
Teegeeack One exits a light fissure and comes to an abrupt
stop.
INT. TEEGEEACK ONE - COCKPIT
Two PILOTS check the controls.
PILOT #1
The Hyper drives down. We’re dead
in the water. Raise Teegeeack and
let them know whats going on.
PILOT #2
Roger that.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 47.
The first pilot flips a toggle switch as the second pilot
sends out the hail.
PILOT #1
(Into comm device)
Attention delegates, the ships
experiencing some Hyper drive
difficulty. It should be fixed in a
few minutes. Hold tight in the
meantime.
PILOT #2
I’m trying to raise Teegeeack. But
the signals not getting through.
PILOT #1
Subspace interference?
PILOT #2
I don’t think so. It’s almost like
we’re being jammed locally.
Then the lights flicker. The cabin goes dark.
EXT. TEEGEEACK ONE - SPACE
Another fissure opens. A Galactic Defense Force ship races
out and targets Teegeeack One.
INT. TEEGEEACK ONE - PASSENGER AREA
Rawl sees what’s happening outside.
RAWL
We’re under attack!
He jumps out of his chair.
EXT. TEEGEEACK ONE - SPACE
The G.D.F. ship cuts loose a stream of plasma fire.
Teegeeack one is hit hard.
INT. TEEGEEACK ONE - PASSENGER AREA
Sparks fly in the cabin. Rawl is knocked over hard.
Pandemonium ensues, sparks fly.
EXT. TEEGEEACK ONE - SPACE
The G.D.F. ship launches another salvo. Plasma fire slams
into the ship.
INT. TEEGEEACK ONE - PASSENGER AREA
A large section of the hull blows out. An instant vacuum
pulls dozens of delegates into space.
Rawl pushes some buttons. A force field activates. The hull
is sealed for the moment.
Mish makes his way to Rawl.
RAWL
Min? MISH
Shes alright!
RAWL
We’ve got to get to the cockpit
before they make another pass!
They knock passengers over as they rush to the cockpit door.
They kick it open.
INT. TEEGEEACK ONE - COCKPIT
Rawl and Mish look at the pilots, dead. The ship controls
are smashed. They throw the pilots out of the chairs and hop
in.
Rawl scans the console. Its dead.
RAWL MISHThe hyper drives still -- What happens when it all offline. We’ll have to burns up? we’ll be dead in ignite the fuel and fly space again!
manually! --
Rawl quickly glances at a screen on his arm. He pushes some
buttons.
RAWL
There’s a planet twenty
clicks from our position.
It’s our best shot! --
MISH
-- Got it!
48.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
49.
RAWL
Let’s hope its got an
atmosphere, Okay punch it!
--
MISH
-- punching!
Mish pushes the button that will ignite the fuel.
EXT. TEEGEEACK ONE - SPACE - CONTINUOUSWe follow Teegeeack One as its thrusters fire up. Like a
meteor, its streaks towards the Planet.
The G.D.F. ship makes its turn to pursue. It speeds up and
fires again, missing.
INT. TEEGEEACK ONE - COCKPIT
The cockpit rattles violently. Plasma fire streaks by the
forward view port.
Min and Ap enter the cockpit. Rawl bellows out.
RAWL
We’re going down!
EXT. PLANET ALTEC - ATMOSPHERE
The two ships plunge into the atmosphere.
Teegeeack One veers off to the left, right. It twirls as it
dodges incoming fire.
INT. TEEGEEACK ONE - COCKPIT
The tree line is visible through the view port.
RAWL
Prepare for a crash landing!
They brace for impact.
EXT. TEEGEEACK ONE - JUNGLE
Teegeeack One slams into the jungle. Tree branches rip apart
as the ship descends.
The ship collides with the ground with an ear splinting
CRASH.
EXT. XENU’S SHIP - SPACE
Xenu’s ship glides silently through space. It approaches a
PLANET.
The planets ugly charcoal colored atmosphere is faintly
illuminated by a distant dwarf star.
INT. XENU’S SHIP - COCKPIT
Inside the cockpit the three men gaze at the monstrous world
as it nears. Xenu turns to Chi.
XENU
Welcome to planet Tawn Chi.
EXT. XENU’S SHIP - TAWN’S ATMOSPHERE
The ship enters the atmosphere. Poking through swirling dark
clouds. It approaches the surface.
EXT. XENU’S SHIP - TAWNS SURFACE
In the distance, we close in on a lone MOUNTAIN. It jute’s
out of the bleak desert like a foreboding castle.
INT. XENU’S SHIP - COCKPIT
Chi’s eyes bug out as Mountain looms ever larger on the
forward port.
CHI
What is this place?
XENU
Impressive isn’t it? I call it
"Mount Xenu." Inside that mountain
is the last remains of a very
ancient and advanced civilization.
Chi looks genuinely impressed.
CHI
Who were they?
XENU
We believe they were called
"Alienist." They
apparently controlled much of the
galaxy eons ago.
50.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 51.
Then Chi looks out a side window as the ship circles the
Mountain.
At the base of the mountain is a military CAMP. Thousands of
Space Ships, including the captured Grey fleet, are parked.
In another area thousands of G.D.F. Soldiers march in
formation.
Chi looks back to the forward Viewer. The ship is about to
collide with the Mountain!
CHI (CONT.)
Sir we’re about to crash!
EXT. XENU’S SHIP - MOUNT XENU
A hole slides opens in the Mountain side allowing Xenu’s
ship to enter.
INT. XENU’S SHIP - COCKPIT
Xenu let’s out a Laugh as Chi continues to Panic.
INT. MOUNT XENU
The ship flies down a dark corridor. It hoovers for a moment
then makes a decent, landing on a platform.
The ships hatch opens. The men exit and are met by a crew of
G.D.F. soldiers.
G.D.F. OFFICER
Welcome back your excellency.
XENU
The situation has changed. We will
commence with Operation Ramrod at
once. Are the ships ready?
G.D.F.. OFFICER
Yes, they are ready on your
command! XENU
Very good. You may commence.
The officer bows his head and bolts off. He speaks into his
wrist comm device.
EXT. MOUNT XENU
The captured Grey ships engine’s start. One by one the ships
float up into the air and leave the planets atmosphere.
EXT. PLANET TAWN - ORBIT
Fissures of light open before the Grey ships. The ships
disappear into the fissures.
EXT. PLANET ALTAIR - GREY FLEETThe peaceful back water world of ALTAIR rotates in space. SUPERIMPOSE: PLANET ALTAIR
In the distance, Grey vessels rocket towards the world. The ships Missile systems activate and target Altair.
EXT. CAPITAL CITY - DAY - CONTINUOUS
Hundreds of people walk the streets of the bustling capital.
Oblivious to the imminent threat.
Then dozens of missiles rain down from above. With surgical
precision they strike.
Massive explosions erupt from all quarters of the city.
INT. MOUNT XENU - CONTINUOUSXenu, Chi and Sty make their way through the complex.
The interior looks like something out of a Lovecraft
nightmare. Twisted, uneven architecture. It makes for a
disorientating experience. Not unlike a FUN HOUSE.
The place is crowded with TECHNICIANS examining different
alienist technology.
CHI
How did you find this planet?
XENU
One of my R&D companies discovered
it some years ago. Its not on any
star map. Perfect cover for my
operation. (Gestures) This is my
weapons manufacturing facility.
52.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 53.
They walk through a factory. TANKS, ARMORED TRUCKS, GUNS are
being welded together by ROBOTIC ARMS on an assembly line.
Now we see a row of black colored BODY ARMOR not dissimilar
to the ones wore by the Loyal Officers.
CHI
Beautiful suits.
XENU
Their prototype’s. The R6 MODEL.
incredibly durable.
INT. MOUNT XENU - CORRIDOR
As they continue Chi notices strange Alienist "ART" lining
the corridor.
The mural’s depict, ANGELS, DEMONS, A CRUCIFIX, HELICOPTERS,
TRAINS, SPACE SHIPS, SPACE BATTLES.
A little further they come cells with Grey prisoners inside
Obviously tortured and malnourished. They stare blankly as
the men pass.
INT. MOUNT XENU - TORTURE CHAMBER
They come to a large door. A massive Greek PSI SYMBOL
emblazons the Arch leading inside.
INT. MOUNT XENU - TORTURE CHAMBER
We see Dozens of TRANSPARENT TUBES in this room. Its
Alienist technology.
XENU
I call this room the torture
chamber. These devices are Alienist
technology.
XENU Step in.
Chi reluctantly steps inside the tube. Xenu walks over to a
lever and pulls it down.
A wave of energy envelopes the tube. Chi’s locked in a state
of suspended animation.
From Chi’S POV, he can hear Xenu and Sty perfectly. But he’s
paralyzed.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 54.
Xenu pulls the lever back up. The energy wave disapates.
Chi steps out, breathing heavily. Panicked.
CHI
What the hell was that?
STY
It puts the subject in suspended
animation. CHI
I was conscious. But I couldn’t
move. XENU
That’s right. It’s far worse than
being buried alive.
STY
From what we know it has an endless
power supply. Theoretically, the
subject could be put in suspended
animation forever.
The idea causes Chi to shudder.
XENU
Can you imagine the fear it could
induce in the population? No
citizen would dare oppose us for
fear of being imprisoned in one.
Chi nods yes. Then he notices a device in the corner. It
looks like a rocket launcher console. He walks over to it.
CHI
What’s this for? It looks like a
missile launch console.
XENU
This is what I wanted to show you.
It is a launcher, for more nuclear
missiles.
CHI
More? Do you plan to use them?
XENU
Only if necessary. Now do you see
why I’m confident we’ll succeed?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
55.
Yes.
CHI
Xenu smiles just as a voice comes in over his communication
device.
G.D.F. OFFICER (O.S.)
Lord Xenu. The mission to Altair
was a complete success.
XENU
Excellent! It’s almost time for me
to make my broadcast to the
peasants. Lets go.
EXT. PLANET ALTEC - JUNGLE - CONTINUOUS Teegeeack One lays in a smoldering crater. Rawl, Mish, Min and Ap and two surviving delegates hastily
make their way into the jungle brush as -
- The G.D.F. ship circles. A blast of plamsa hits Earth One.
Whats left is evaporated.
Then the G.D.F. ship lands. Troops pour out, guns drawn.
They go to the wreckage and search. The G.D.F. Commander,
ZORT, yells...
ZORT
Any sign of Rawl’s body?
G.D.F. SOLDIER
(Scanning)
No sir. He’s not in the wreckage.
ZORT
He must have survived. We have to
find him! G.D.F. SOLDIER #2
Sir, Our guns will be useless.
Zort points to another Soldier. He holds a DF-81 RIFLE. A
weapon that quick freezes anything it hits.
ZORT
Chi gave us those to combat Rawl.
He wont stand a chance.
Rawl notes this exchange and signals for the others to
quietly follow him.
INT. MOUNT XENU - COMMUNICATIONS ROOM
Xenu stands at a make-shift rostrum. Video bots are
recording the proceedings. An assistant gestures to Xenu to
begin his speech.
XENU
Good evening citizens. A short time
ago the Confederation was attacked
by a familiar foe, the Grey
Invaders. Today they murdered
innocent men, woman and Children.
But they do understand the folly of
their actions. We are strong. We
are prepared, and our resolve is
unshakable. I have ordered the
Galactic Defense Force to be on
high alert and ready to repel our
borders and relocate citizens to
safe zones if needed. Be assured
that we will not let this attack go
unpunished. We will persevere and
defeat our enemy. Thank you and may
God Bless the Galactic
Confederation.
The assistant motions that the broadcast is over. Xenu walks
toward Sty and Chi.
XENU
Phase one is about to commence.
We’re returning to Home Planet.
EXT. ALTEC - JUNGLE - DAY
The Loyal Officers make their way through the alien Jungle.
Its a bizarre experience because the vegetation moves as if
its inteligent.
MISH
What’s the plan?
RAWL
Steal that G.D.F. ship and get off
this planet. MISH
Sounds easy enough. (To Ap) Whats
the odds of success?
56.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
57.
AP
Fifty, fifty at best.
MISH
I dont like those odds.
AP
Better than zero.
Mish shrugs. DELIGATE #1
Why did they try to kill us?
RAWL
Xenu doesn’t like me.
MIN
Your right. But I didn’t think he
would take it this far.
RAWL
We’ve got to get back to home and
warn the rest of the Loyal
Officers.
Then they hear a noise, somethings stirring. Now a GRUNT is
heard. Rawl signals them to stop.
WHOOSH. the delegate furthest behind is whisked away in
silence. Falling leaves the only sign he was there.
Rawl turns around and notices the missing deligate. He looks
wide-eyed at Mish.
Rawl signals the others to pick up the pace. Another grunt
is heard. This time closer. Now the Jungle shakes.
A giant creature CRASHES out of the bush. A fucking MONSTER,
resembling a giant MUTANT BEAR. It stares at it’s prey,
ready to pounce.
The group runs like mad. The creature gives chase. It
immediately snatches up the last trailing delegate and
chomps.
The creature smashes through the trees like twigs. It’s
gaining ground, fast.
RAWL Suit up!
They click their belt’s and the Theta Armour materializes
around them.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 58.
Rawl stops and lifts his hand ready to shock the beast with
electricity. But its to late. It swipes him. He hurdles
through the air, crashing into a tree.
The others dodge swings from the beast’s massive paws. Min
barley gets out of the way as a swipe decapitates a tree
behind her.
Mish jumps on its back. He punches its neck with his fist.
Sending electricity through its body. It flips him off its
back. The beast seems dazed from the jolt.
Both Min and Mish launch electric bolts from their hands at
the monster. Rawl jumps in and launches his own bolt
barrage.
The creature begins to buckle. It collapses. Smoldering, but
still breathing.
The group gets together, winded, but otherwise unharmed.
In the distance, they hear the G.D.F. officers approaching.
RAWL
Let’s go.
EXT. CAPITAL - PLANET CRONJIN - DAYA Loyal Officer walks briskly up MARBLE steps leading into
an office building. Causally, unsuspecting.
Stepping out from behind a row of columns, six G.D.F.
soldiers aim their DF-81 rifles at him. He stops in his
tracks.
LOYAL OFFICER
What is this?
G.D.F. COMMANDER
Sir you’ll have to come with us. On
orders of Xenu.
LOYAL OFFICER
I’m not going anywhere!
The Loyal Officer activates his Theta Armour. He centers his
body against the oncoming assault.
A G.D.F. Soldier aims and fires. The weapon sends out an
energy wave. The Loyal Officer is frozen solid in an
instant.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
59.
G.D.F. COMMANDER
Two Soldiers drop a transparent freezing unit on the ground.
INT. LOYAL OFFICERS QUARTERS - DAY
Four Loyal officers casually conduct business in a
conference room. Then a KNOCK on the door.
LOYAL OFFICER
Come. Three G.D.F. Soldiers burst through the door. Weapons aimed.
All four Loyal Officers are frozen before they have a chance
to react.
Four freezer units hit the floor.
EXT. SPACE PORT
A small government cruiser glides in for a landing. Two
Loyal officer among step out of the ship.
Behind a truck several G.D.F. Soldiers crouch.
As the Officers continue a flash of energy hits them. Ice
and frost spread down their bodies. The other passengers
scream and run for cover.
INT. XENU’S OFFICE - DAY
Xenu sits quietly at the conference table. His eyes closed,
as if hes in deep meditation. An assistant walks up to him
disturbing his reverie.
ASSISTANT
My Lord, Phase one is reported all
clear.
Xenu opens his eyes. A pleasant smile comes over his face.
XENU
(nonchalantly)
Excellent. launch Phase Two.
Xenu closes his eyes again.
Bag him!
EXT. GALACTIC BASE - DAY
Thousands of Ninth Army Soldiers and officers crowd the
parade grounds. Some practice martial arts.
Others March in formation, preparing for possible combat
missions.
INT. TEEGEEACK - GALACTIC BASE - DAY
The OPS room is buzzing with activity. Several soldiers
monitor long distance communications.
One soldier glances intently at his computer screen. He
turns to the Base Commander.
COMMUNICATIONS OFFICER
Sir, I’ve just lost all
communications with Galactic Base
Altair.
COMMANDER
That’s strange. Did they report
anything unusual?
COMMUNICATIONS OFFICER
(Urgently)
They reported several incoming
ships approaching the planet.
Communications ended after that.
The Commander closely looks at the data on the screen.
Another Communications Officer turns to the Commander.
COMMUNICATIONS OFFICER #2
Sir we have several ships coming
out of FTL near Teegeeack.
EXT. TEEGEEACK
Several fissures of light open near the planet. Three Grey
vessels exit the fissures.
INT. TEEGEEACK - GALACTIC BASE - DAY
The screen indicates the approaching ships.
60.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
61.
COMMUNICATIONS OFFICER
Commander, Three Grey ships just
came out of FTL!
COMMANDER
Battle alert!
The communications officer attempts to open communications.
COMMUNICATIONS OFFICER
All communications just went down!
Another officer yells out.
COMMUNICATIONS OFFICER #2
Sir the Bases force field is
deactivating!
Alarms sound off.
COMMUNICATIONS OFFICER #2
We have incoming!
The Commander stares at the radar screen. The deadly
missiles are closing in rapidly.
EXT. GALACTIC BASE - DAY
The Base is evaporated in a massive explosion.
EXT. ALTEC - JUNGLE - DAY - CONTINUOUSThe Loyal Officers quietly observe the G.D.F. Ship from
behind the trees.
RAWL
Okay Min work your magic.
Min gives a naughty smile to Rawl. She undoes the buttons on
her shirt and steps off into the bushes.
She yells out...
MIN
(Yelling)
Help! Can someone help me?
ZORT
(Pointing at the men)
You, go! (CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 62.
The G.D.F. soldiers rush towards the pleading cry. They see
Min standing up against a tree. Part of her breasts are
exposed.
They approach her with guns drawn, cautious. But they like
what they see.
Lady Min looks relieved to see the men.
MIN (CONT.)
Oh Thank God! Our ship crashed! Can
you help me? The men lower their weapons. They circle Min like a pack of
hungry wolves.
G.D.F. SOLDIER
(Menacingly)
Yes we can help you.
He caresses her hair.
MIN (Sly) Thank you.
G.D.F. SOLDIER
But first tell us where Rawl is.
RAWL (O.S.)
Right here!
An armored fist jacks the agent’s jaw knocking him flat. A
barrage of fist and flying bodies follow as Min and Mish
take the soldiers apart with skilled MARTIAL ARTS COMBAT.
After the melee they make their way to the edge of the
clearing. Zort and the Soldier with the freezing weapon
stand guard.
Rawl WHISTLES. the two men swiftly turn around. Rawl wryly
waves at them. The soldier fires the freezing weapon.
Rawl jumps up in the air -
- As the soldier sprays the weapon he freezes trees and
foliage. But misses Rawl as he deftly dodges the beam.
Then Rawl lands in front of the soldier. He Karate kicks him
in the chest. Zort tries to run but is flattened by Min.
All three stand triumphant. Min buttons her shirt. The other
three smile.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
63.
Lets go!
RAWL
They board the G.D.F. Ship. The engines start. The ship
launches upwards.
The remaining G.D.F. soldiers converge on the area. They
watch as the ship climbs higher.
From the Jungle a grunting sound comes out. The beast is
back. Zort pulls himself up and peers into the trees. The
Beast jumps out. Screams fill the air.
INT. XENU’S OFFICE - DUSK
Xenu and his cabinet watch a perky news reporter with a
somber expression on the Home Viewer.
Scenes of the now destroyed Galactic Bases are shown.
NEWSCASTER
Unbelievably tragic reports just
coming in indicate that every
Galactic Base have been destroyed.
It seems the Confederation is under
a full-scale attack from within...
Xenu looks pleased and turns to the group.
XENU
Operation Ramrod is in full swing
gentlemen. Now we initiate Phase
Three. So without further delay.
Xenu motions towards a communications assistant. The
assistant speaks into a comm device.
ASSISTANT
All units begin Phase Three.
Xenu turns around in his chair. He whispers to himself...
XENU
A little gift for you Rawl. The
hero who saved Teegeeack from the
Volcano.
EXT. HOME PLANET - BLACK NEIGHBORHOOD - DUSK
People go about their business on what looks like a normal
evening. Then on the Tele-Screens an Emergency System KLAXON
sounds off.
On top of many buildings and intersection’s, red strobe
lights come alive and flash.
A caption appears on the screen that reads: Stand By for an
important announcement from the Galactic Defense Force. This
is not a test.
Many people stop and point at the Tele-screens. The
neighborhood comes to a stand still as crowds gather.
A G.D.F. officer appears on the screens. His voice echos
through the streets.
SOLDIER
Attention citizens. Your attention
Please. Due to increasing Grey
Invader attacks, this area has been
designated for mandatory
evacuation. Galactic Defense Force
Teams will be converging in the
area shortly. You will be escorted
to Planetary Evacuation vehicles
and taken to safe zones. I repeat
this is a mandatory evacuation.
The Telescreen turns to a map showing the neighborhood.
scrolling across the bottom of the screen is the words
"ATTENTION: AN EMERGENCY EVACUATION ORDER IS IN EFFECT FOR
THIS AREA."
Then above the Neighborhood two ships fly overhead.
Planetary Evacuation vehicles. The vessels are so immense
they briefly block out the night sky.
Confusion insues. A citizen blurts out.
CITIZEN #1
What the hell’s going on?
CITIZEN #2
I think we’re being evacuated.
Now a rumble is heard. Down the street an endless line of
ARMORED VEHICLES roll in. The crowds react with nervous
curiosity.
The Armored Vehicles start parking. Hundreds of heavenly
armed G.D.F. troops exit the trucks.
64.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 65.
Then massive AIR BUSES, three stories tall, land in what
seems like every crevice of the neighborhood.
Now the sound of boots hitting the ground echos through the
streets. Whole squadrons of Soldiers march in formation in
the middle of the Avenue.
G.D.F. COMMANDER
(On megaphone)
Citizens! Evacuation protocols are
now in effect. You are to proceed
to the Air Buses for immediate
departure.
A crowd of citizens surrounds the G.D.F. Commander. One of
the citizens steps forward.
CITIZEN
What about our belongings? Our
homes? G.D.F. COMMANDER
There’s no time. You must go now.
People in the crowd raise their voices. They look more
agitated with each passing moment.
CITIZEN
We’re not going anywhere!
The troops raise their rifles, preparing for a conflict. The
tension builds.
G.D.F. COMMANDER
All of you people get to the Air
Buses, now!
The crowd doesn’t back down. It’s turning into an angry mob.
CITIZEN
I’d rather die than be forced to
leave my home!
The angry citizen has had enough. He pulls out a blaster.
Before he can take aim the Soldiers fire. The mans crumpled
body hits the ground.
Screams fill the night air. The soldiers turn their weapons
on the crowd.
G.D.F. COMMANDER
Now get to the Air Buses.
The crowd disperses. Many start to cry as they are led away.
EXT. BLACK RESIDENTIAL AREA - NIGHT
Megaphones continue to blare the evacuation order.
Soldiers March down a residential street. Pounding on the
doors of every house on the block. Entire families are
marched out and taken to air buses.
The air buses, packed with people, whisk away into the
night.
EXT. LAUNCH AREA
Helicopters fly overhead, pouring spotlight on the area.
An endless line of people walk up the gigantic hatches that
lead inside the ships.
Air Buses continue to land and unload people then
immediately take off again to pick up more.
EXT. PLANET PROCYON - CAPITAL CITY - DAY
Another neighborhood is being evacuated. Another Soldier
speaks on the city Tele-screen’s.
SOLDIER
All citizens who are in the Field
of the Arts, education, Journalism,
religious leaders, civil liberty
activist, or those who are
unemployed must report to Air Buses
Immediately for relocation.
The G.D.F. troops led a long line of mostly White Procyon’s
towards Air Buses. Some citizens are agitated. They look
suspiciously at the troops. Two people break from the line.
PROCYON CITIZEN
Where are we being taken?
SOLDIER
Safe zones.
PROCYON CITIZEN #2
Why are only people like us going?
SOLDIER
We’ll get the others soon. But only
after your safe. (Almost mockingly)
You people are important to us.
66.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
67.
PROCYON CITIZEN
(Groveling)
Thank you! Thanks for saving us.
The soldier dismisses the citizens gratitude. He motions for
him to continue.
EXT. PROCYON - LAUNCH AREA
The last of the Procyon citizens enter the Evacuation
Vehicle’s.
Two men stand at the bottom of the Evacuation Vehicle. A
G.D.F. Commander and a lab coat wearing Psychiatrist.
G.D.F. COMMANDER
That appears to be the last of
them.
The Psychiatrist adjusts his spectacles.
PSYCHIATRIST
Then they may proceed to Teegeeack.
The Commander speaks into his wrist communicator device.
INT. EVAC SHIP - COCKPIT
Two Pilots sit at the controls awaiting orders.
G.D.F. COMMANDER (O.S.)
Okay your clear for take off.
The pilot flips a switch.
PILOT
Roger that, engaging engines.
EXT. EVAC SHIP - DAY
The JET ENGINES light up. The motors turn downwards giving
the behemoth ship lift. It floats upwards.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
Rawl and Mish work the controls. The data on the
computer screen tells the bad news.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
68.
RAWL
(Examining screen)
We’re a long way from home.
MISH
Not only that but this ship has a
tracer device installed. We need to
keep a low profile.
RAWL
Understood. (To Ap) Ap, your the
technical wizard. Do you think you
can access the central G.D.F. data
base from here?
AP I can try. Ap pushes a few buttons. Different images pop up on the
viewer. One shot catches his attention. A diagram of some
sort of energy based weapon.
AP
Interesting. This electronic memo
describes a G.D.F. energy weapon
that has the ability to neutralize
any ships power source and jam any
outgoing radio signals at the same
time.
RAWL
That’s how they got us.
Ap takes out a chip and inserts it into the consol.
AP (CONT)
Indeed. I’m going to download this
data. We may be able to use it.
RAWL
Good, and keep looking. We need to
know whats happening.
AP Of course. MIN
We need to contact Teegeeack asap.
RAWL
We will. Then we’ll get that maniac
put in chains.
Ap looks up from the console.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
69.
AP
I found something else Rawl. It
seems three Galactic cruisers are
being held by the G.D.F. on Coltus.
And their crews are scheduled to be
executed.
RAWL
Does it say when?
AP No.
MISH
We have to rescue them.
RAWL
Agreed. But we have to get home
first and warn Congress before
anything else.
INT. XENU’S OFFICE - NIGHT
The office is being prepared for a party. More people show
up at the door and are let in. The atmosphere is festive,
jovial.
Xenu stands alone, sipping on a drink. An assistant walks up
to him.
ASSISTANT
Your excellency, All planets report
the evacuations are complete and
they are on route for Teegeeack .
XENU
Very good, inform me the moment
they arrive. ASSISTANT
Yes, my lord.
The assistant briskly walks away. leaving Xenu alone again
staring out the window.
EXT. OUTER SPACE
The armada of Planetary Evacuation Vehicles reache the edge
of the Star system.
The systems sun shines softly in the distance.
INT. EVAC SHIP - COCKPIT
The Pilot works the controls. He takes the speaker device in
his hand.
PILOT
This is Galactic Defense Force to
Teegeeack administration, come in.
INT. ADMINISTRATION OFFICE - DAY
A disheveled administrator pushes a button on the
communications console.
JOL
This is Administrator Jol in
command of Teegeeack in Governor
Rawls absense. Go ahead.
INT. EVAC SHIP - COCKPIT
The pilot talks into the device...
PILOT
We have the cargo and are ready to
deliver. INT. ADMINISTRATION OFFICE - DAY
Jol responds...
JOL
Understood. Commander Zel has given
me a full debriefing on the
situation. You may proceed.
INT. EVAC SHIP - COCKPIT
The Pilot turns to the co-pilot.
PILOT
Prepare to enter the Atmosphere.
PILOT #2
Roger that.
The co-pilot works the controls.
70.
EXT. TEEGEEACK ORBIT
The Armada enters the atmosphere. Friction from the entry
causes plasma flame to flicker on the ships hull.
EXT. TEEGEEACK ATMOSPHERE - DAY
The ships glide towards Teegeeack’s surface. Flying through
the cloud line. They break formation and scatter in
different directions.
EXT. TOWN - DAY
The view of the Fleet stops people in their tracks in the
town streets. An awesome site to behold.
Despite being a mile above, the ships are so enormous, small
details on the hull are still easily discernible.
INT. EVAC SHIP - COCKPIT
A VOLCANO is visible through the ships forward view port.
CO-PILOT
Has anyone asked why we’re taking
these people to volcanoes?
PILOT
Nope.
Its nuts.
Its nuts.
CO-PILOT
PILOT
(Incredulous)
We’re dreaming this shit up.
They both have a nervous laugh. The pilot takes the
microphone.
PILOT (CONT.)
Attention passengers.
INT. EVAC SHIP - CARGO HOLD
Tens of thousands of grim evacuees, some sad, some angry,
others frightened, listen as the pilot over the intercom
system.
71.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
72.
PILOT (O.S.)
We’ll be arriving at the emergency
camps shortly. Thanks for your
patience. Stay Calm...and keep in
mind, this is just a dream.
EXT. VOLCANO - DAY
The dormant volcano looks majestic against the blue sky.
Wisps of clouds trickle across its top.
A dozen Emergency Evacuation vehicles circle the mountain.
Their landing gear drops. The motors turn downwards giving
the ships lift as they float down towards the ground and
land.
The ships HANGER DOORS open. People stream out. Just as soon
as they reach the bottom soldiers start herding them up the
mountain side.
A mother walks holding her little girls hand.
LITTLE GIRL
Where are we going mommy?
MOTHER
Its okay sweety. We’re going to be
alright.
The exhausted mother and daughter continue.
Then G.D.F. Troops bring out thousands of cryo chambers.
Inside are frozen Loyal officers. They stack them
haphazardly on the volcanoes side.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
Zel observes Teegeeack through the view port. His grim face
reflects in the glass.
G.D.F. AGENT
(Through communicator)
Lieutenant Zel, the evacuees have
been unloaded.
ZEL
Very good. Your ships may take off
after the charges have been set.
Zel turns to a monitor. It shows Xenu’s delighted face.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
73.
XENU
The proceedings are being recorded
as I ordered? ZEL
Yes my Lord. You will receive a
full copy. EXT. VOLCANO - DAY
A HELICOPTER hoovers above the Volcano. It lowers a round
METALLIC OBJECT. A 451 MX EXPLOSIVE DEVICE. The most
powerful atomic bomb ever made, on top of the mountain.
At the foot of the Volcano, the human multitude move about,
bewildered, confused. Some yell, wanting to know what’s
happening.
The last of the Evacuation vehicles blast off.
Then a force field activates around the mountain. The
hapless people are trapped.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
A communication comes in over a monitor. Its Administrator
Jol from Teegeeack. He looks furious.
JOL
(On Monitor)
Zel! You dumped millions of
refugees here and then abandoned
them. This isn’t what you told me
would happen. What’s going on here?
ZEL
The plan has changed. These are
Xenu’s orders. I’m sorry.
JOL
What am I supposed to do with all
these people?
ZEL (Cold) Nothing.
Zel flips off the monitor. He steps over to a control panel.
A RED BUTTON flickers on and off. He stares at it.
The helmsman turns to Zel.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
74.
HELMSMAN
Execute sir?
A short beat as Zel contemplates the consequences of this
act.
ZEL Execute. The agent pushes the button.
EXT. VOLCANO - DAY
A BLINDING FLASH. The tip of the volcano detonates with an
atomic explosion.
The people below don’t even have a chance to scream. They
are instantly vaporized. The MUSHROOM CLOUD expands
outwards.
The shock wave spreads across the surface like an expanding
tornado of flame. Everything in its path is devoured.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
Zel looks at Teegeeack through the view port. Atomic
explosions flash all over the globe.
An uneasy look appears on his face. This is genocide on a
planetary scale.
EXT. TOWN - DAY
The fiery cloud approaches the town like a hellish dust
storm. People gaze at it, mesmerized.
As it gets closer, many attempt to flee. But only for a
moment. The atomic cloud engulfs the town. In an instant,
it’s gone.
EXT. TEEGEEACK - VARIOUS LOCATIONS
Teegeeack’s surface is now a smoldering radioactive hell.
MONTAGE
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 75.
A crater of another Volcano spews molten lava down its
slope. Its fury awoken by the atomic blast. Another one
erupting. Capital city, now a heap of radioactive debris.
Teegeeack Base One, leveled. Only Rawls ship, Prydwen
remains unscathed.
END MONTAGE INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
Zel lowers his head. He sighs and turns to the communicator.
ZEL
Send the recording directly to
Xenu’s office.
The communications officer complies.
EXT. SPACE - G.D.F. SHIP IN FLIGHT
The stolen G.D.F. ship rockets through the stars.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUSRawl, Min, Mish and Ap listen intently to the communications
coming through on the Galactic channels.
REPORTER
This is truly a sad day. We are
just receiving breaking news from
the Galactic Defense Force that
Teegeeack has just suffered a full
scale assault from the Grey
invaders. Resulting in the death of
Commander Rawl, leader of
Teegeeack.
A photo of Rawl appears with the caption underneath: 9033 -
9066.
Rawl sits up in his chair. A look of dread comes across his
face.
No.
RAWL
REPORTER
Xenu is said to be distraut after
learning of Rawls death and the
attack on Teegeeack and has sworn
(MORE) (CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
76.
REPORTER (cont’d)
to redouble his efforts to defend
the Confederation. Stay tuned for
further details.
Rawl stands up, his eyes burning with rage, his fist
clinched.
RAWL
How close are we to Teegeeack?
Mish examines the computer console.
MISH
We’re closing in on the system. But
you know the moment we jump out of
hyper drive the G.D.F. will be all
over us.
RAWL
No doubt.
Another BEEP comes from the computer. Mish looks at his
console.
MISH
I think we’re close enough to pick
up Teegeeack’s communication band
width. (Beat) Nothing! I’m getting
no ingoing or outgoing
communications.
MIN
That can’t be right. Could the
G.D.F. be jamming it somehow?
RAWL
I don’t think so. Not the entire
planet. AP
I fear the worse has happened.
Rawl looks worried.
RAWL (To Ap) Are we close enough for you to
remote pilot Prydwen?
AP
I believe so.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
77.
Try it.
RAWL
Ap stares blankly into the distance. As if trying to reach
someone telepathically.
AP
I have opened a communication line
with the ship. Its under my control
now.
RAWL Good.
EXT. TEEGEEACK BASE ONE - PRYDWEN
Prydwen sits in the middle of smoldering debris. Remarkably
there doesn’t look like a scratch on the ship.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
The bridges instrumentation’s come to life.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
The Loyal Officers watch Ap as he continues.
AP
I’ve engaged Prydwens engines.
RAWL
Bring her here.
EXT. TEEGEEACK BASE ONE - PRYDWEN
The Prydwen engines light up. Dust bellows underneath the
ship as it lifts off the ground.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
Ap nods yes. AP
Shes on her way.
Rawl turns to Mish.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
78.
RAWL
Take us out of FTL.
MISH
Roger that.
EXT. EDGE OF STAR SYSTEM
A fissure of light opens. The stolen G.D.F. ship comes out
and comes to a stop.
In the distance, two other G.D.F. ships start towards Rawl’s
ship.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
Mish sees the incoming G.D.F.. A communication beep sounds
off.
MISH
They’re hailing us.
RAWL
Dont respond.
MIN
We better suit up.
EXT. TEEGEEACK ORBIT
The G.D.F. fleet orbit’s the planet. Zels ship one of them.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
Zel sits at the COMMAND POSITION. The HELMS MAN receives a
communication on his console.
HELMSMAN
Lieutenant, Two ships are reporting
an unauthorized vessel has just
entered the system.
ZEL
There’s not supposed to be any
ships in this area. Tell them to
destroy it at once.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
79.
HELMSMAN
But sir, the ship is one of ours.
ZEL To bad.
EXT. SPACE - G.D.F. SHIP
The two G.D.F. ships open fire. Rawls ship takes a direct
hit.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
The bridge vibrates from the attack.
The Loyal Officers are in full armor.
MISH
This bucket won’t take much more of
that! Another salvo shakes the bridge. Sparks fly out of the
console.
RAWL
Abandon ship!
AP What?
RAWL
You heard me. Get to the airlock.
EXT. SPACE - G.D.F. SHIPSThe two ships converge on Rawls ship. They continue to blast
it until it explodes.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
Zel stokes his chin as he watches the Helm.
HELMSMAN
Sir, there’s a vessel leaving
Teegeeacks surface.
ZEL
Thats impossible!
EXT. TEEGEEACK ORBIT
The Prydwen rockets out of Teegeeack’s upper atmosphere.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
The bridge personal tense up as Prydwen approaches.
HELMSMAN
(Nervous)
Lieutenant it’s coming straight at
us!
ZEL
Fire everything!
EXT. TEEGEEACK ORBIT
The G.D.F. Fleet closes in fast on the Prydwen. Every ship
fires its weapons.
Missiles strike the Prydwen, with little effect.
Then Prydwen launches a ferocious barrage of ANTI-MATTER
RAYS back at the enemy vessels. Cutting through them like a
hot knife through butter.
Now Prydwen closes in on Zel’s ship.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
Zel looks helplessly as Prydwen looms closer in the view
screen. His ship doesn’t stand a chance.
HELMSMAN
Leautenant, what do we do?
ZEL
(Apathetic)
Nothing. Zel animates in a cowardly manner. He runs out off the
bridge. Fleeing for his life.
80.
EXT. TEEGEEACK - ORBIT
Zels ship is evaporated with a single ray burst. A small
craft flies out just as it disintegrates. Zel’s escape pod.
The Prydwen rockets forward in search of the Loyal Officers.
leaving behind metallic debris floating in Teegeeack’S
orbit.
EXT. SPACE The Loyal Officers float through space. Their Theta armor
giving off a slight glow in the void.
MISH
I think I’m going to be sick.
AP
Prydwen is almost here.
RAWL
Hurry Ap.
Just as soon as Rawl says this, a huge shadow, slides up
next to them. Another G.D.F. Ship, ready to capture them.
Then the ship is hit with an anti-matter beam. The Ship in
cut in half.
Prydwen comes into view. It glides up next to the Loyal
Officers.
They grab on to its hull. The hatch opens, and they enter.
INT. PRYDWEN - CORRIDOR
The Loyal Officers rush down the Corridor. Their Theta
Armour deactivates.
RAWL
We have to find out whats happening
on Teegeeack.
Ap grabs Rawl by the shoulder.
AP
Rawl, its been destroyed. When I
activated Prydwen I was able to
scan the ships data base. The
entire planet was bombed by Atomic
weapons. I’m sorry.
81.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
82.
RAWL
Any survivors?
AP
Unknown. But mathematically the
odds are very low that there are.
Rawl lowers his head, stunned.
He stumbles to a wall and collapses. Min rushes up to him.
She puts her hand on his shoulder. Mish and Ap look on.
MIN
(Bitterly)
Xenu. RAWL
It’s my fault.
MIN
No! Don’t you dare blame yourself
for this. MISH
She’s right. This was
planned. There’s no doubt about
it.
Rawl composes himself. He stands up and gives a forced smile
to Min. But a fierce look of determination grows in his
eyes.
RAWL
We’re going to Teegeeack.
EXT. TEEGEEACK - ORBIT
Prydwen enters the Planets orbit. The once beautiful blue
world has been reduced to a fiery inferno.
EXT. TEEGEEACK - CAPITAL CITY
The Ship lands. The Loyal Officers, fully armored, exit the
ship. They stop and take in the radioactive desolation. The
Capital City is in ruins, ash rains down like snow.
MIN
(Nearly crying)
Oh my god. (CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
83.
MISH
Xenu. That murdering bastard.
Rawl scans the devastated Capital.
FLASHBACK
Rawl sees the city alive again, its beauty, the people.
END FLASHBACK
RAWL
Teegeeack will live again. I swear
it.
Min puts her hand on Rawl’s shoulder.
MIN
What now my love?
RAWL
We have to overthrow Xenu.
AP
It will be difficult. We will need
help.
Rawl looks up at the others.
RAWL
The Ninth Army Fleet interned on
Coltice. We have to free them.
AP Exactly. MISH
That still might not be enough.
RAWL
Maybe the people will fight back
to. Revolution. Together there’s a
chance.
MIN
Let’s hope.
The Loyal Officers start back for Prydwen.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
The loyal officers settle in.
RAWL
Mish, can we patch in to the
Confederation Broadcast system?
Mish checks the console.
MISH
Yes we can. You can send a
Confederate wide broadcast at any
time. It will preempt any other
programing happening on the
network.
RAWL
Very good. I need to stir the pot.
A wry grin grows on Rawl’s lips.
INT. XENU’S OFFICE - NIGHT
A wild party rages in Xenu’s office. Half nude woman perform
erotic dances for the guests. MUSIC blares out from the
sound system. Xenu and his cabinet sit alone in a corner of
the room.
CHU (Drunk) So my Lord, You will appoint me
head of the the new Central
Galactic Bank?
XENU
Yes. I need a good stooge there.
You fit the bill perfectly.
Chu takes the insult like a compliment. Chi snickers.
Two messengers enter the room. They approach Xenu.
MESSENGER
Lord Xenu, the press Corp is
waiting for your address to the
Confederation.
XENU
Ah yes. I’ll be there momentarily.
(To the cabinet) Excuse me please.
Xenu exits the room.
84.
INT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - MEDIA ROOM
A large group of Reporters sit, ready for the press
conference. Cameras are recording. Homeviewer screens are
on.
Xenu enters the room, appearing stately, dignified even, and
quite pleased. He steps up to the rostrum, clears his throat
and looks straight into the camera bot.
XENU
Good evening citizens of the
Confederation. I come to you now
with news of great hope. We are
winning. After the devastating
first attack, we have held strong
and are now pushing the enemy back.
The homeviewer screen flickers. The image on the screen
scrambles. Another transmission is coming through. The face
of Rawl appears on the screen!
RAWL
(On homeviewer)
Citizens! This is Rawl of the Loyal
Officers of the people.
Xenu’s eyes bug out. He attempts to continue the speech.
XENU
(Face drop)
Ah ah. The...er victory is in site
citiz...
Rawl cuts in. RAWL
People, do not listen to this
murderer! EXT. CAPITAL CITY - NIGHT
People gather around the cities’ homeview screens.
RAWL
The Grey attack was staged by this
genocidal maniac. He killed the
Loyal Officers and our own people
in order to seize power.
Rawls words echo throughout the city streets.
85.
INT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - MEDIA ROOM
Kol frantically yells into his communicator, trying to stop
the broadcast. He flees the media room in a rush.
On the screen, Rawl continues.
RAWL
Citizens stand up and fight against
this oppressor, now!
Finally, the broadcast is jammed. The screen goes static,
then a newscaster comes on.
NEWSCASTER
We seem to be having some technical
difficulties. We’ll return in a few
moments.
Xenu stumbles away from the rostrum. He hastily exits the
media room.
INT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - HALL WAY
Xenu enters the hall walking past a terrified Kol who is
held by two guards. Xenu doesn’t even glance at him.
Kol slumps with a sigh of relief. The two guards loosen
their grip. Kol even manages a quite giggle.
WACKKKKKK! Xenu’s cane slams into the back of Kols head. Kol
never knew what hit him. He hits the floor with a loud THUD.
A wild-eyed Xenu peers down at the corpse.
INT. XENU’S OFFICE - NIGHT
Xenu bursts through the door. Crazed, pumping his cane. He
scans the room. He sees Chi. He bolts over to him. Dropping
his cane, he grabs Chi by the collar.
XENU
He’s alive! You told me he was
dead! The bastards alive!
CHI
(Terrified)
Who is alive my lord?
86.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
87.
Xenu releases Chi.
No shit. XENU
XENU
Rawl!
CHI
Impossible. He was terminated by my
personal death squad!
XENU
Oh really? Well, I just watched his
prime time television debut!
CHI
He must have escaped.
CHI
I’ll kill him. I swear it!
XENU
I will not tolerate another mistake
Chi. Xenu picks up his cane and pumps it. Chi fearfully stares at
it.
CHI
Yes my Lord.
EXT. PRYDWEN - SPACE
Prydwen streams past the stars. A PLANET looms in the
distance, COLTUS.
A fleet of ships are in orbit around the planet. Held by
force field, the mighty Galactic Cruisers of the Ninth Army.
A G.D.F. HOLDING FACILITY orbits next to the fleet.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
Rawl gazes at Coltus as it nears, several G.D.F. FIGHTER
craft exit the Holding facility and approach Prydwen on an
attack trajectory.
RAWL
Mish, scan the base. How many Ninth
Army soldiers are in there?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
88.
MISH
One moment. We have some greeters I
need to say hello to.
RAWL
Of course.
EXT. PRYDWEN - COLTUS
Prydwen obliterates the G.D.F. fighters in a blaze of
anti-matter rays.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
Mish is finished with the fight and ready to scan the base.
MISH
Now I can concentrate on your
request.
He scans the base.
MISH (CONT.)
Scanners show there’s just a little
over ten thousand troops in
detention cells. Not a lot.
RAWL
It’ll have to do. Take us in.
EXT. SPACE - PRYDWEN - G.D.F. BASE
Prydwen flies in towards the G.D.F. base. Plasma fire knocks
out the bases force field.
The ship glides into an open hanger bay.
INT. HANGER G.D.F. Troops hurriedly set up tripod plasma guns and take
aim at Prydwen.
The Armored Loyal Officers spring out of the ship. The
Troops open fire. The Loyal Officers dodge the plasma fire
and reach the Troops.
A barrage of martial art combat ensues until the Officers
stand in a heap of crumpled soldiers.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
89.
RAWL
The Loyal Officers exit the hanger bay.
INT. G.D.F. BASE - CORRIDOR
Alarms sound off as Rawl, Min, Mish and Ap make their way
down the corridor.
They reach a large hanger door. The door reads: CELL XX-88
NO UNAUTHORIZED PERSONAL BEYOND THIS POINT.
RAWL
Mish, is this it?
MISH
Yes, Captain Kep is in this cell.
RAWL Open it?
Ap works the key pad and the Door slides open. The Officers
enter.
INT. CELL XX-88
Rawl sees a CRYO STORAGE CHAMBER with Captain Kep inside. He
checks the controls and flips a switch. The chamber lights
up, its doors open. A gush of frosty air bellows out.
Inside, Kep stirs. He grabs each side of the Chamber and
launches himself forward.
CLANG, CLANG, Kep steps up to Rawl.
KEP
Whats going on?
Lets go.
Rawl smiles.
Revolution my friend.
INT. G.D.F. BASE - CORRIDOR
The loyal Officers and Kep walk down the corridor. Many of
Kep’s men are awake now and continue to free
their comrades.
Rawl turns to Kep.
RAWL
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
90.
RAWL
We have to take back Home Planet.
KEP
You can count me in.
MISH
Whats the plan?
RAWL
I’ll capture the Executive Palace.
(To Kep) I need you to take out the
main G.D.F. Base.
KEP
We will or die trying.
AP
The executive Palace has a very
strong force field protecting it.
RAWL
(To Mish)
When we get back to the ship I want
you to scan the sector for any
G.D.F. patrols that have a command
ship in em.
MISH Okay.
AP A hunch?
Rawl nods yes.
EXT. HOME PLANET - CAPITAL CITY - MORNING
On the main boulevard, rioters, armed with guns and anything
else they can grab, and City Police Officers engage in a
fierce battle with G.D.F. troops.
A blazing G.D.F. TANK lies in the middle of the street.
Explosions blast the area relentlessly.
It looks like a war zone. Many of the rioters are getting
slaughtered.
INT. XENU’S OFFICE - DAY
Xenu sits in his office. He stares at the home-viewer.
Reports of riots happening across many Planets of the
Confederation are shown.
Pictures of the G.D.F. shooting rioting citizens continue.
ASSISTANT
Reports of more riots in the
capital your excellency. It appears
some of the planetary Police forces
are defecting and joining the
rioters.
XENU
(Sardonic)
Tell the G.D.F. commanders to shoot
all rioters on site. Then have the
news broadcast that Confederate
wide Martial Law is now in effect.
CHU
This is not good my lord.
XENU
It’s to be expected Chu. (Beat) But
I’ll kill everyone of them if I
have to.
INT. CHI’S COMMAND SHIP - BRIDGE
Chi looks at the helm.
CHI
(To Helmsman)
Anything on scanners?
HELMSMAN
Nothing sir.
CHI
Keep scanning. He’s out here. I
know it. EXT. HYPER SPACE - GALACTIC CRUISERS
The Galactic cruiser’s bolt through Hyper space. Prydwen
leading the pack.
91.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
Mish watches the scanners intently. He sees the squadron of
G.D.F. ships.
MISH
(To Rawl)
Rawl, There’s a fleet of G.D.F.
Vessels in sector twelve. Chi’s
Command vessel is one of them.
Rawl sits forward in the Command position. This is what he’s
been waiting for.
RAWL
Yes! Have they spotted us?
MISH
I don’t think so. But their
definatly looking for something.
RAWL
Ap, can you duplicate the energy
dampening effect against them?
AP
Yes, I should be able to shut down
their power before they can fire a
single shot.
RAWL
Good. Signal the fleet we’ll be
coming out of FLT in a few moments.
Mish, prepare to exit hyper space.
MISH
On your command.
Rawl eyes the helm display, it shows the G.D.F. fleet is
getting closer. Mish looks at Rawl. The fleet is almost on
top of the G.D.F. vessels.
The tension builds.
RAWL
Now! 92.
EXT. SPACE - G.D.F. FLEET
The G.D.F. Fleet navigate at low speed as fissures of light
materialize around them.
Rawl’s ships blast through the fissures and surround the
G.D.F. fleet.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
Loud KLAXONS blare. Bridge crew chaotically run back and
forth. The helmsman turns to Chi
HELMSMAN
Sir we’re surrounded by Ninth Army
cruisers! CHI
Arm weapons! Prepare to fire!
Then the bridge lights and the consoles start to flicker.
Strange ELECTRONIC SOUNDS echo through the hull.
HELMSMAN
lieutenant, ship power is
fluctuating. We’re losing power!
CHI
Thier using the dampening device
against us. The bridge’s power goes out except for the dim emergency
lights.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
Rawl looks at the view screen.
RAWL
Open a communication channel.
MISH
Channel open.
RAWL
Attention G.D.F. Vessels. Your
ships are disabled. Prepare to be
boarded.
93.
INT. G.D.F. SHIP - BRIDGE
The console shows the image of Rawl as he continues.
RAWL (CONT.)
Do not resist...or you will die.
Chi slumps back in defeat.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
Rawl turns to Mish.
RAWL
Mish, tell Commander Kep. I want
Chi taken alive.
MISH
You bet. MIN
What do you plan to do with him?
RAWL
I have a few questions he may have
answers to. Pradwen makes several BEEPING noises. A communication from
the Ninth Army comes in.
MISH
Rawl. Chi’s been apprehended. But
he said hurry. He’s having a hard
time not killing him.
RAWL
Tell him I’ll be right over.
INT. CHI’S COMMAND SHIP - BRIG
Chi sits on a chair in the middle of a force field cell. Kep
stands over him. He’s frightened, sweating. His face bloody.
Rawl enters the Brig. Kep grabs Chi by his hair.
KEP
You said alive. Well he is. But I
wanted to thank him for what he did
to me and my men.
Rawl smiles. 94.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
95.
RAWL
Understood.
KEP
But he’s not being very
cooperative.
RAWL
I see. Hello Chi.
Chi doesn’t reply.
RAWL (CONT.)
I need your help.
Again he doesn’t respond. A nervous smirk is all he can
muster.
Rawl turns the force field off and enters the cell. He walks
up to him. Chi cowers as Rawl gets closer.
RAWL (CONT.)
You’re not going to talk?
Chi clears his throat.
CHI
I don’t talk to traitors.
RAWL
I wont bother arguing the point.
But you are going to help me. One
way or another.
A soldier enters the brig. He holds a syringe that contains
a green fluid.
Chi looks at the syringe and jumps out of his chair. Several
soldiers take him to the floor, fast.
CHI No!
RAWL
Oh yes Chi. As I said. Your going
to help me. One way or the other.
INT. XENU’S OFFICE - MORNING
Xenu looks out the window. Smoke rises from the distance.
The riot is getting closer.
An assistant rushes up to Xenu.
ASSISTANT #2
Lord Xenu, we are receiving a
communication from Chi. He has Rawl
in custody and is returning!
Xenu’s face lights up, this is the stroke of luck he has
been waiting for.
XENU
Excelent!
Xenu rushes over to the communications terminal. A
holographic image of Chi appears. His expression is bland
and robotic.
XENU
Chi! You’ve captured Rawl?
CHI
Yes my lord. He is in my custody
right now. Lower the Executive
palaces force field and I’ll bring
him right to you.
A look of suspicion comes over Xenu’s face. He can tell
something’s wrong.
XENU
Of course. Before I do is
everything alright?
CHI
Yes. Everything’s fine.
XENU
You did a very good job Chi.
CHI
Thank you Sir. Now the force field
please? XENU
One moment.
Xenu looks down at the console. His finger moves toward a
button. He stops. Then he swiftly flips the holographic
communication off.
96.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
97.
XENU
(To assistant)
Is my ship ready?
ASSISTANT
Yes your emenence.
XENU
That idiot managed to get captured
by Raul. I’m leaving.
INT. GALACTIC CRUISER - BRIDGE
Rawl and Kep stands to the side of Chi out of view of the
Holographic image communicator.
A brief beat as they observe the console. The Force field is
not coming down.
RAWL
He’s on to us.
KEP
Your going to have to do it the
hard way. RAWL
Yep.(Into Comm. device.)Mish,
prepare for combat.
MISH
(Through Comm. device.)
We’re ready here Rawl.
INT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - HALL
Xenu rushes through the hall way. He make’s his way to the
Palace Hanger -
INT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - HANGER
- He enters the Hanger and hastily makes his way to the
Executive Ship. Several members of Xenu’s cabinet follow
behind.
XENU
I’m leaving the Planet.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
98.
CHU
Your going alone?
XENU Yes.
CHU
Who’s in charge while you’re gone?
XENU Zel.
ZEL
What about Chi?
XENU
He’s finished.
Xenu enters the ship. Its engines light up. The ship lifts
up and flies out of the hanger.
EXT. HOME PLANET - ORBIT - CONTINUOUSA multitude of fissures open near Home planet. The Prydwen
and the three Ninth Army Cruisers exit.
Above Home Planet four G.D.F. battle ships are in orbital
patrol. Like a never ending swarm of locusts, G.D.F.
fighters catapult out of their hangers and target Rawls
fleet.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
The bridge crew tense up as the inevitable battle nears.
RAWL
(Into Communication device)
Kep, launch fighters.
EXT. HOME PLANET - ORBIT
Fighters fly out of the Galactic Cruisers launch bays -
- and rocket straight for the incoming G.D.F. fighters. The
two forces collide. Explosions lite up the darkness of space
like a fire works display. Beautiful, yet deadly.
A savage dog fight ensues. Many G.D.F. fighters are
instantly destroyed by their well trained opponents.
But the Ninth Army fighters are vastly outnumbered.
INT. GALACTIC CRUISER - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS
Kep yells to the helm.
KEP
Target those Battle Ship!
EXT. HOME PLANET - ORBIT
Two NUCLEAR TORPEDOES launch from Keps Cruiser. They streak
across space on target for two of the G.D.F. battle ships.
They hit their marks. Two blinding explosions. The G.D.F.
ships are obliterated.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS
Now its Rawl’s turn...
RAWL
Take out the other two!
EXT. HOME PLANET - ORBIT
The two surviving G.D.F. battle ships are nailed by
anti-matter rays. Cut in half.
Dead G.D.F. crew float out of the wreckage.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUSRawl flips the communications switch. The image of Kep
appears on the screen.
RAWL
Lets do it!
KEP
Roger that!
EXT. HOME PLANET - ATMOSPHERE
As the Ninth Army and G.D.F. fighters continue to battle,
Keps ship and the Prydwen break away and head for their
targets on the surface.
99.
INT. GALACTIC CRUISER - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS Kep closely observes the forward view port.
HELMSMAN
One minute until the target is in
weapons range.
EXT. MAIN G.D.F. BASE - DAY
The Base is a fortress, built like a concrete bomb shelter.
It’s surrounded by towering walls and massive metal gates.
KH-M80 PLASMA CANONS jute out of the top of the walls and
fire MISSILES at the oncoming Galactic Cruiser.
INT. GALACTIC CRUISER - BRIDGE
The bridge rocks violently. Continuous explosions light up
outside the view port.
HELMSMAN
We’re getting pounded!
KEP
Stay on target!
EXT. MAIN G.D.F. BASE - DAY
Keps ship does a nose dive towards the base.
Three Black Objects drop out of the ships bottom.
BOOM! A nuclear explosion instantly vaporizes the G.D.F. Base.
The cruiser accelerates away from the expanding mushroom
cloud.
EXT. PRYDWEN - EXECUTIVE PALACE - DAY The Prydwen is surrounded by G.D.F. fighters. They launch a
non stop barrage of plasma fire at the ship.
100.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
Sparks fly out of the console as the prydwen takes a
beating.
RAWL
On my mark.
Mish tenses up on the joy stick.
EXT. PRYDWEN - EXECUTIVE PALACE
Prydwen is almost on top of the Executive Palace.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
An intense beat. Rawl yells -
RAWL
Fire! EXT. EXECUTIVE PALACE
The force field is slammed by an Anti-Matter ray.
Huge explosions flash as the force field collapses.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
The Loyal Officers give each other a triumphint look. Over
the communications device Kep is heard.
KEP
Rawl, we’ve taken out the G.D.F.
base and we’re on our way!
RAWL
Got it Captain!(To Mish, Min,
Ap)Let’s rock!
EXT. EXECUTIVE PALACE
The Prydwen lands hard outside the Executive Palace just as
Keps behemoth Galactic cruiser does the same.
Ninth Army Troopers pour out of Keps ship like a flood.
They’re met by rapid fire from G.D.F. troops hunkered down
around the parameter. Both sides are locked in ferocious
combat.
101.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 102.
The Loyal Officers join the fight. Rawl maintains a barrage
of fire as soldiers on his left and right are lacerated.
The last of the G.D.F. soldiers are killed under a rain of
fire.
INT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - HALL
G.D.F. Troops scurry around in chaos. Confusion, chaos
encompasses the Palace.
Chu, Zel ,Sty and the Galactic Bankers stare out the window
at the battle outside.
ZEL
Get out of here!
They bolt for Xenu’s office.
EXT. EXECUTIVE PALACE
Keps troops and the Loyal Officers blast their way to the
Palance entrance.
They smash through and enter with Rawl leading the way.
INT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - HALL
The few G.D.F. troops inside open fire, but are quickly
blown to bits. The hall is secure.
Rawl turns to Kep.
RAWL (To Kep) I’m going after Xenu’s cabinet
members!
KEP Got it!
MIN
Rawl be careful!
Rawl starts for the staircase that leads to the Palaces
upper levels and Xenu’s office. At first, he doesn’t notice
Mish following closely behind.
He taps Rawl on the shoulder.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
103.
MISH
I cant let you have all the fun
buddy. RAWL
Glad you joined!
MISH
Wouldn’t miss it for the world!
Both men bolt up the stairs.
INT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - HALL
Rawl and Mish enter the hall way. Its strangely quiet,
unnerving. There should be more G.D.F. Troops ready for
battle, instead, nothing.
They step forward. Cautious. As they continue walking they
step through a laser beam near the bottom of the floor. A
trip!
KABOOM! A bomb goes off sending both Officers flying like
rag dolls down the hall. Shrapnel explodes in all
directions.
Rawl lies in a heap of debris. He stirs, sits up and sees a
group of Renegades with guns drawn bearing down on him.
He instantly jumps up and starts kicking the shit out of
them. One by one they fall.
He stands triumphant, but he turns his attention to Mish.
Rawl scans the Hall but doesn’t see any sign of him.
RAWL
Mish! Do you read me?
RAWL (CONT.) Mish!
A sound comes out a distance away. A pile of debris stirs.
Mish slowley stands and dusts himself off. Rawl runs up to
him.
MISH
Wow, that was rough!
No reply.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
104.
RAWL
You okay?
MISH
Of course.
RAWL Come on.
They both rush down the Hallway. They reach the doors to
Xenu’s office.
RAWL (CONT.)
This is it.
MISH Do it.
They raise their guns and fire. The door is blasted to
cinders. They rush in.
INT. XENU’S OFFICE - DAY
Both men enter the office. Smoke makes it difficult to see
at first, but it quickly clears.
Zel, Chu and Sty sit huddled in a corner, whimpering like
children. They know what’s coming. They look up pleadingly
at the two Loyal Officers.
RAWL
(Angerly)
Where is Xenu?
INT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - HALL
Rawl and Mish bring Zel, Chu and Sty down the stairs,
handcuffed.
Kep walks up to them.
RAWL
Take these criminals into custody.
KEP
With pleasure.
Four Ninth Army troops take them.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
105.
MIN
Where is Xenu?
MISH
He escaped.
RAWL
But Zel told us where he is.
AP
And I guess we’re going to get him?
RAWL
No...I am.
MIN Rawl, no! Rawl places his hand on her shoulder. He looks at the others
to.
RAWL
Kep needs your help. Stay here.
I’ve got to finish this.
MISH
Hey! I cant let you go by yourself.
A pensive, sad look comes over Rawls face.
RAWL
Mish, I have to.
Rawl grabs Mishe’s shoulder. He gazes deeply in his eyes but
says nothing.
EXT. EXECUTIVE PALACE
Rawl prepares to leave Home Planet for Tawn.
He steps up to Kep.
RAWL
You have things under control here?
KEP
Yes, Just bring that murderer back.
Rawl turns to Lady Min. He kisses her gently and they
embrace.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
106.
RAWL (CONT.)
I love you.
MIN
Come back to me please.
RAWL I will.
Rawl board’s Prydwen. Min, Mish and Ap watch as the ship
blasts off.
EXT. PLANET TAWN - ORBIT
The ship approaches Tawn. It enters the upper atmosphere.
EXT. TAWN - MOUNT XENU
Prydwen flies towards Mount Xenu.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
Rawl sees the G.D.F. Base at the foot of the Mountain.
The display on the console reads: TARGET LOCKED. Rawl grabs
the JOY STICK and prepares to fire.
EXT. MOUNT XENU - BASE CAMP
The G.D.F. Guards are startled as they see Prydwen
approaching. One of the Guards yells into a communications
device.
G.D.F. SOLDIER
All hands battle stations. We have
incoming! An alert sounds at the G.D.F. base camp. Troops pour out of
their barracks, ready for combat. But Prydwen is already on
top of them.
The G.D.F. Base is engulfed in flames from a single volly of
Prydwens weapons.
INT. PRYDWEN - BRIDGE
Rawl sees that the base is destroyed and lands the ship.
EXT. MOUNT XENU
Rawl exits Prydwen and makes his way towards the black
Mountain. He sees the entrance and goes in.
INT. MOUNT XENU
Rawl makes his way down the corridor. He hears a NOISE.
BAROOM. From out of the darkness shots rain out. Rawl dodges
and returns fire as he rolls on the ground. He cuts down the
G.D.F. troops.
Rawl gets up and continues until he reaches the torture
chamber door and enters.
INT. MOUNT XENU - TORTURE CHAMBER
As Rawl enters the chamber he cautiously proceeds. He sees
Xenu stir in the shadows.
XENU (O.S.)
Welcome to Mount Xenu Rawl.
Xenu appears to be working a computer console.
RAWL
You’re under arrest Xenu. For mass
murder, Treason, and attempting to
create a police state.
Xenu turns around and steps forward.
XENU
I’m not going anywhere Rawl. And
you’re going to die.
Rawl tenses up and prepares for combat. Xenu points at the
launch device. The display shows a digital clock counting
down from T-MINUS ten minutes.
XENU
See that? I’ve just launched tens
of thousands nuclear missiles. They
will destroy every planet in the
Confederation. If I cant have it,
(MORE) 107.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
108.
XENU (cont’d)
nobody can. And there’s nothing you
can do to stop it!
Rawl glares at the launch device.
EXT. MOUNT XENU
From behind Mount Xenu tens of thousands of missiles explode
out of the ground and ascend towards the heavens.
INT. MOUNT XENU - TORTURE CHAMBER
Xenu steps out of the shadows. His features become more
pronounce. He’s wearing the R6-33 Body Armor. He stops and
puts on its helmet.
The suits power supply activates.
XENU (CONT.)
I’m a God! With the power of life
and death! Xenu lifts his gun, A black CRYSTAL RIFLE, similar to Rawls.
An explosion of plasma flames out of the barrel.
Rawl back flip’s out of the way as the wall behind him is
obliterated.
He lands on his feet and returns fire with his own weapon.
Xenu jumps up in the air to dodge the plasma fire. He lands
behind some equipment.
XENU
You fool. I told you I’m a God!
Rawl takes aim again.
RAWL
You maniac!
Rawl cuts loose. He misses Xenu but shreds the equipment.
With lighting fast reflexes Xenu fires back as he slides
across the floor.
Plasma fire nail Rawl. Hes flung backwards into the air and
slams into a wall losing his gun in the process.
Xenu moves towards him.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
109.
XENU
You piece of shit traitor!
Rawl scrambles to get back on his feet. Dazed.
RAWL
You’re the traitor! You betrayed
the people! XENU
The people are idiots. They deserve
to be controlled.
RAWL
Liar! Xenu picks up him by the neck and flings him across the
room. Rawl lands hard.
XENU
Really? I’ve proven it again and
again. Just tell the people you’ll
give them safety, safety to live
out their dull, meaningless lives.
And they’ll gladly be controlled
like sheep!
Rawl gets up and composes himself. Xenu raises his weapon.
RAWL
You’re afraid of the people Xenu.
You hide behind armed thugs like a
coward!
Xenu gets to close. With lightning fast reflexes Rawl lunges
and grabs the nose of Xenu’s gun. He flings him across the
room. Xenu tumbles hard on the floor.
He sits up, dazed, angry. Then he fires wildly in
desperation.
But his gun stops. He shakes it. Its power supply is
depleted. He tosses the weapon on the floor.
Now the two figures face each other.
RAWL
It’s time to end this.
XENU
Take your best shot Loyal Officer!
They fly at each other. A thunderous collision. Intense
Martial Arts combat follows.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 110.
Powerful blows that would kill an average human dead are
leveled against each other again and again.
Then Xenu back hands Rawl. He fly’s through the door and
lands hard against the corridor wall outside the room.
EXT, CAPITAL CITY - DAY
Min, Mish and Ap stand near a make-shift operations base.
Kep is communicating with his troops.
Min turns to Mish.
MIN
Mish. I know Rawl said he wanted us
to stay. But I cant. I have to go
to him...Now!
MISH But...
Before he can finish Min shakes her head no. Shes going to
Tawn and Mish knows it.
MIN (CONT.)
Okay. We’ll take a Shuttle. (To Ap)
lets go. AP
(Perplexed)
Where are we going?
Mish takes Ap by the shoulder and they rush towards a
shuttle craft.
INT. MOUNT XENU - CORRIDOR
Xenu and Rawl are locked in combat.
But Rawl gets the upper hand. He drop kicks Xenu. He smashes
into a statue. Its pulverized into dust from the impact.
Rawl calmly walks up to him. As he lies on the floor, Xenu
stealthily grabs a METAL ROD, a broken piece of the statue.
In a flash Xenu thrusts the Rod into Rawls chest. He yells
in pain. He stands still for a moment, then falls to his
knees.
Xenu stands above him and takes off his helmet.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
111.
XENU
I told you I wasnt going anywhere
Rawl. And now you die.
Rawl looks up to the ceiling.
FLASHBACK RAWL sees a vision of Teegeeack destroyed, the capital city
in ruins.
END FLASHBACK
Rawl grabs the rod and pulls himself up. Impaling himself
more and more as he does. He stands face to face with a
stunned Xenu.
With his hand Rawl launches a massive electrical bolt. It
sends Xenu hurdling through the air. He crashes into a wall.
A massive electronic explosion engulfs his body. His armor
deactivates. Xenu falls out and lands on the ground in a
Heep.
Rawl gazes at the now incapacitated murderer. He stumbles
back, repulsed.
Rawl pulls out the rod. He stumbles towards the missile
launch device. The display shows he has less than a minute
before the missiles reach the planets.
Rawl furiously works the console. Then the display reads:
ABORT. Rawl pushes a button.
EXT. SPACE Hundreds of missles self destruct in weird airless
explosions.
INT. MOUNT XENU - TORTURE CHAMBER
Rawl looks at the display as it flashes: MISSLES DISABLED.
FLASHBACK
Rawl sees Teegeeack, now beautiful and alive again.
END FLASHBACK
He falls backwards and colapses.
EXT. MOUNT XENU
The shuttle lands. Mish, Min, Ap and several soldiers rush
out of the ship towards the Mountain entrance.
INT. MOUNT XENU - TORTURE CHAMBER Mish, Min, Ap and the soldiers see Rawl on the floor. The
soldiers see the still unconscious Xenu. They bind him with
ELECTRIC HAND CUFFS.
Min kneels over Rawl. His Helmet deactivates. Despite his
grave injury, he still manages a smile.
RAWL
(Almost whispering)
I thought I told you not to follow
me.
Min manages a tearful smile.
MIN
You should know by now you cant
tell me what to do.
RAWL
Xenu? MISH
He’s in custody now.
Rawl weakly nods yes.
RAWL
I had to finish this. Its my fault
this happened.
Rawl gasps in pain. He’s near death.
MIN
You cant die on me. you promised.
RAWL
Death cant keep us apart. Somehow,
I will return to you.
Mish leans over Rawl, tears streaming down his eyes.
RAWL
Mish. I place you in command of the
Confederation in my absence. Free
our people. And make Teegeeack live
again.
112.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
113.
MISH
I’ll do what you ask. I swear it.
Rawl smiles then slumps his head back and takes his last
breath.
Min breaks out into a gush of tears as she holds her lover.
Mish and Ap look sadly on.
EXT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - CONTINUOUS Pradwen lands in front of the Palace. The hatch opens
and Mish, with a bound Xenu clutched in his grip, exit. Ap
and Min follow close behind.
A silent crowd gazes at Xenu as he walks down the platform.
Hateful eyes stab at him.
Mish hands Xenu over to the Ninth Army soldiers.
MISH
Charge him with Treason and
Genocide. The soldiers grab Xenu roughly and whisk him away. He looks
back at the Loyal Officers with a sneer on his face.
Kep steps up to Mish.
KEP
Where is Commander Rawl?
Mish somberly shakes his head.
MISH
He saved us. But he didn’t make it.
Kep sadly lowers his head.
KEP
He’s a true hero. He must never be
forgotten. MISH
It’s time to rebuild the
Confederation Kep. I’ll need your
help.
KEP
You have it my friend.
Min and Ap approach Mish. He smiles.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
114.
AP Now what?
Mish’s image broadcasts on the giant view screens. People
MISH
I’m going to make a Confederate
wide broadcast to the people. A
declaration of Liberty.
INT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - HALL
Camera bots start recording. Mish stands behind a podium.
The technician points to Mish. He’s on.
MISH
(Looking at Camera)
Hello my fellow citizens, I am Mish
of the Loyal Officers to the
People. I come before you asking
forgiveness. Ten years ago, we
elected a man as Supreme ruler who
turned out to be nothing more than
a tyrant.
EXT. HOME PLANET - CITY STREET - CONTINUOUSMish’s image broadcasts on the giant view screens. People
gather to watch.
MISH (CONT.)
We foolishly allowed the Executive
Branch of the government to take
away our freedom and in the process
the very principles this
Confederation was founded upon
became trampled...the most
important being the principle of
individual liberty.
EXT. PLANET PROCYON - CAPITAL CITY - DAY
The same image is being broadcasted on the view screens of
the Procyon capital city.
MISH (CONT.)
We traded our freedoms for a false
sense of security and allowed mad
men to take control of our lives.
Because of this, many of our people
died and my home planet of
Teegeeack was destroyed.
A sad expression comes over his face.
INT. EXECUTIVE PALACE - HALL
Mish continues the speech.
MISH (CONT.)
But this is a new day. Xenu and his
criminal conspirators have been
defeated by Commander Rawl and they
will soon be judged for their
crimes. I promise you with my life
that we will rebuild our worlds
(beat) and live free again. Thank
you.
The crowd gathered in the Hall begin to clap. Peoples faces,
once grime, now smile.
INT. GALACTIC SUPREME COURT ROOM - CONTINUOUS
A BLACK ROBED JUDGE sits behind the Bench. Xenu, Chi, Chu,
Sty and Zel sit before him, shackled.
Mish and the remaining Loyal Officers watch.
The Judge clears his throat. He holds a piece of paper in
his hands. He reads.
JUDGE
Xenu, former Supreme ruler of the
Galactic Confederation. Chi, former
head of the Galactic Defense Force.
Zel, former head of the Teegeeack
Branch of the Galactic Defense
force. Chu, former head of the
Galactic Bank and Sty, Former head
of the Galactic Psychiatric Order
are hereby sentenced to life in
prison without the possibility of
parole. Such is the fate of
tyrants.
The Judge hammers a final blow from his gavel.
A collective gasp in the court room. The audience look
puzzled. Xenu actually manages a smirk. This is a rather
lite sentence for the magnitude of his crimes.
But a wry grin comes over Mish’s lips.
115.
INT. MOUNT XENU - TORTURE CHAMBER
Mish paces back and forth in front of five stasis
tubes. Camera bots record the proceedings.
Strapped inside the tubes, Xenu and his co-conspirators,
stand bound and gagged. Mish peers at them.
MISH
Chi told Rawl about this place
Xenu. He said these devices puts
one into suspended animation
forever.
Several Ninth Army soldiers set up Tele Screens in front of
the prisoners. They turn them on. On the screen the video of
Teegeeack being destroyed is displayed on a continuous loop.
MISH(CONT.)
You men have been sentenced to life
in prison without the possibility
of parol. And so it will be. You
will spend the rest of your lives
here.(beat) I hope you enjoy the
view.
The men start to struggle with their binds. They mumble
pleadingly. Mish pays no attention as he walks to the
device’s lever.
He looks back at Xenu. Terror shows in his eyes. Mish
pauses, then pulls the lever. An energy wave flows over the
prisoners, putting them in suspended animation.
MISH (CONT.)
(Coldly)
I hope you enjoy the view.
Mish motions for everyone to leave. The room goes dark. He
walks out of the chamber. The door slowly closes behind him.
He motions to a soldier.
MISH
Seal the mountain. And this planet
has a permanent quarantine.
SOLDIER
Yes sir!
Mish cooly walks away.
116.
EXT. SPACE - TEEGEEACK
We see the once blue/green planet in a rage. Its atmosphere
a hellish red swirle of clouds.
EXT. TEEGEEACK - MOUNTAIN - DAY
A large group stands at the foot of a MOUNTAIN. A cave has
been carved out of its side.
The procession, lead my Mish, Min, Ap and Kep walk into the
cave entrance. Pallbearers carry Rawls crystal casket.
INT. CAVE Deep inside the cave we see a magnificently decorated
interior. Murals depicting Rawls defeat of Xenu and his many
other heroic acts.
Also parked in the cave is Rawls ship, the Prydwen.
The mourners silently circle Rawls casket. Three lights
illuminate it, giving it a beautiful glow in the gloom.
EXT. TEEGEEACK - MOUNTAIN - DAY
The last of the mourners exit the cave.
Technicians seal the entrance. The Mountain looks as if its
never been disturbed.
EXT. POST APOCALYPTIC TEEGEEACK - DAY
The burned out radioactive landscape stretches as far as the
eye can see.
The Loyal Officers, fully Armored, stand next to a mountain
sized machine. A PLANETARY TERRA-FORMING MACHINE.
Several mechanical devices detach from the main structure.
They crawl away in different directions.
MIN
It’ll take millions of years just
to make Teegeeack habitable again.
MISH
Yes. But the entire planet will be
Terra formed by this device.
(MORE)
117.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
118.
MISH (cont’d)
Healed. And when the time is right,
it’s programed to sow the DNA for a
future human race.
A holographic image of human DNA projects from the machine.
Mish turns the image off.
MIN
A new beginning?
MISH
That’s what Rawl wanted.
AP
I just hope the future human race
fares better than the last one.
Mish nods in agreement.
MISH So do I.
The Loyal Officers watch as the terra forming devices move
over the horizon.
FADE OUT:
Over a black screen, block letters appear that read:
75 million years later
EXT. SOUTH DAKOTA - WILDERNESS - DUSK
FADE IN:
We fly over the the wind whipped area of South Dakota
badlands. On the horizon we see an archeological site.
SUPERIMPOSE: SOUTH DAKOTA BADLANDS PRESENT DAY EXT. SOUTH DAKOTA - ARCHEOLOGICAL SITE - DUSK
Dozens of people dig in a huge pit. Heavy machinery moves
back and forth.
It appears something is being unearthed. Whatever is is, its
just out of our field of vision.
Three ARCHEOLOGISTS stand on a platform and gaze into the
pit.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
119.
ARCHEOLOGIST #1
This is it! The Holy Grail of
Biology! The greatest discovery in
history.
ARCHEOLOGIST #2
How old is it?
ARCHEOLOGIST #1
Carbon dating puts it at around
seventy five million years. Give or
take a few million years.
ARCHEOLOGIST #3
Do we have any idea what it is?
The archeologists shakes his head.
ARCHEOLOGIST #1
From its internal structure, it
could be some sort of Terra Forming
device. But we’re not exactly sure
yet.
ARCHEOLOGIST #3
Is it Extra-Terrestrial?
ARCHEOLOGIST #1
Possibly. (beat) If it is, it
changes everything.
They look back down.
We slowly follow the scene downwards.
Sitting inside the pit is the Terra Forming Device Mish, Min
and Ap stood before, eons ago.
THE END
FADE OUT:
BACK STORY
Denise Brennan 11 hours ago
I should note that this is NOT in fact Hubbard's script but is actually written by [probably] an Independent scientologist called Harley Wolfe.... but as the scions lie and mislead all the time I thought.... fuck it!
http://www.facebook.com/people/Harley-Wolfe-Jr/100001837618178
he also has a rather sad twitter presence where he makes frequent attempts to contact Cruise, Travolta and Data from Star Trek
https://twitter.com/HughHoyland
BACK STORY
I should note that this is NOT in fact Hubbard's script but is actually written by [probably] an Independent scientologist called Harley Wolfe.... but as the scions lie and mislead all the time I thought.... fuck it!
http://www.facebook.com/people/Harley-Wolfe-Jr/100001837618178
he also has a rather sad twitter presence where he makes frequent attempts to contact Cruise, Travolta and Data from Star Trek
https://twitter.com/HughHoyland
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